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8/15/22, 4:16 PM
This should be named “bluest balls” the series. 😂

8/22/22, 9:01 PM
@TcomJ 💙⚽️🏀🎾⚾️🏐 😜 sorry, haha. I do have the ideas in my head to close out I Love Him, But to tie it in here and then know how I’d planned out the battle between Alex, Rob, and the Prof. Just gotta get the libido, energy, and time to fully dive in. I don’t wanna give any half-ass version.

2/11/23, 6:59 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Hey mens labido for most guys start going down after 30 albeit bery slowly. So you are not getting any younger. 😂

2/18/23, 6:40 PM
@[TcomJ](/user/show/921298) The accurate SHADE of it all 😂
2/18/23, 4:48 AM
This is fantastic! Love it

2/18/23, 6:37 PM
@[Bowser](/user/show/951939) Thanks! Glad you liked it!
2/18/23, 2:33 PM
I noticed Mr. Peter called himself Puck, does this story take elements from Shakespeares ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream?’
2/18/23, 12:39 PM
I hope a new story rangers/sentai vs Valentine evil
2/18/23, 12:13 PM
When will the next chapter being coming out?
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 11:07 AM
I'm sorry, but AI generated stories should have no place here. There's no soul or eroticism to it. AI still runs based on biased coding. We're nowhere near it having a presence in creative communities where it won't create harm.
2/18/23, 3:27 AM
Hot writing as always :)

2/18/23, 7:50 AM
@[NZcontroller](/user/show/23780) Thank you! Trying not to abandon my stories this year
2/18/23, 12:59 AM
Not gonna lie, I love the darker stuff myself, and this hit a real hot button for me. I'm sorry Anonymous was so destroyed by this story. I guess he accidentally landed here instead of the Women's Auxiliary Bridge League website. My only complaint, and this is certainly not limited to Baralai, is the consistent grammar/word choice typos. I just sometimes want to take a red pen and bleed all over these stories. Must be the horny English teacher in me.

Martin
2/18/23, 7:43 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) > Must be the horny English teacher in me. Yeah, those horny teachers. I know you enjoy having him *in* you :)
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 3:17 AM
It will be interesting to see how AI writing develops, but it's just not there yet. ChatGPT in particular has been hobbled to prevent it from writing erotic scenarios and dialogue. I'm not sure it's any good at writing fiction at all yet, but it particularly is unable to capture the erotic charge necessary for this type of story. To the author, I would suggest you take what the AI has put out and try to re-write it in your own words, and flesh it out. Add some characterization and flourishes to breathe life into it. That would be more productive than having the AI continue to produce stories like this as a finished product. I understand how frustrating writer's block is. Try to let the AI help you push through it, but don't let it tell your story on its own. It's not up to the task.

2/18/23, 4:47 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I love this feedback
Dec 27, 2016
2/18/23, 3:45 AM
Please tell me there will be more