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2/17/23, 5:15 PM
Fantastic story!
Feb 17, 2023
Elm
2/17/23, 4:05 PM
There are a lot of things that I like about this story, specially the "read" command. It is a tad noticeable how it wasn't written by a person tough (it reiterates a lot, using the SAME words, instead of different ones for emphasis). Even while English isn't my first language I can tell something is off with the writing. Overall I liked it tough!

2/17/23, 4:23 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Thanks, Elm! That's really helpful feedback! You're absolutely right, the AI tends to like to use the same phrases verbatim, I have to kinda coax it to not do that with some creative prompting or else manually edit in those nuances. I'll pay closer attention to that when I edit next time! I ninja edited in some minor changes, hopefully it smooths things out a little!
2/17/23, 4:12 PM
Loved this story, definitely one of my favourites.
2/16/23, 6:33 PM
If a human wrote this, I would avoid being too critical. But since an AI program wrote it, I feel comfortable saying that this is boring as shit. Whatever erotic heat could be generated from this premise is totally missing from this rendering. I think some of the issue is that ChatGPT isn't very good at writing fiction (yet). I fed the first two sentences of your prompt into NovelAI and I got a story that's much more interesting to read, even if it doesn't totally hit your brief. The next day at work, I was sitting in my cubicle when Mr. Johnson stopped by. He wore the same outfit as yesterday: short sleeve button-down shirt, slacks, and dress shoes. His hair had been freshly cut and he smelled of cologne. As usual, he did not speak unless spoken to. When I acknowledged him, he walked over to me and sat down on my desk. Once seated, he looked at me intently and said, "Your performance is satisfactory." The words were factual and without emotion. Mr. Johnson stood up, walked behind me, and placed a hand on my shoulder. I tensed up in anticipation but didn't move or say anything. He gave me a quick squeeze around the shoulders before saying, "I have been satisfied with your performance thus far, but there are areas that need improvement. You should be more attentive to detail and not leave any room for error." My eyes widened as my mind raced through all that had happened since last night. Did he mean what I thought? Was he going to let it go? I felt myself blush as I turned back around and stared at my computer screen. "That's great," I replied, trying to sound positive and upbeat, which wasn't easy given my current thoughts about our encounter. After several moments of silence, Mr. Johnson spoke again, "If you continue to perform well, I will consider allowing you to display your talents in the locker room during breaks. Do you understand?" Again, I nodded my head. My heart pounded against my rib cage so hard I could hear the echo throughout my chest. I knew if he allowed me to demonstrate my prowess, I would probably wind up with bruises and scratches from guys jumping out of their clothes and fighting over me. But, that wouldn't really matter. It was just a fantasy anyway. I could never do that. Mr. Johnson noticed my reaction and smiled. "Don't worry, Mike. This will be very controlled. If I see any problems, I'll stop it immediately." My pulse quickened further. He hadn't actually said no to me! This was better than I imagined. I almost forgot to answer when he asked my final question, "Do you have any questions?" I shook my head, unable to articulate anything intelligible. He patted me on the shoulder and left the cubicle, leaving me feeling both excited and anxious. Was this really happening? What would the next few days bring?

2/17/23, 12:09 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Does NovelAI have the same censorship with NSFW content? I've being using chatGPT to write little short story prompts myself to see what I can get away with before it ultimately stops me from making it write more content.

2/17/23, 12:11 PM
@[Anima](/user/show/929667) No censorship, but it does have a very heterosexual bias whenever it starts writing sex scenes. I haven't found a good way to nudge it towards gay erotic content and away from straight erotic content.
2/17/23, 9:28 AM
Great continuation of series! The original was hot but it's getting hotter
2/17/23, 7:08 AM
One of my favourites. Come back to it alot.
2/17/23, 3:13 AM
i ❤️ Jack Parker
2/4/23, 6:42 AM
It was interesting and cute (one might say) at the same time. And the continuation of the story: "Pup Training for Police" will be?

2/17/23, 12:51 AM
@[Bright Dream🏳️‍🌈](/user/show/10028726) Soon.
2/17/23, 12:39 AM
Looking forward to more!
2/16/23, 11:41 PM
Looking forward to more from this series hopefully, always love your stuff!