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Jan 16, 2023
2/16/23, 11:05 PM
love it!
2/16/23, 9:42 PM
This slow, sinister seduction is extremely well done. I have loved the two parts I've read so far, for sure.
Nutiper
2/16/23, 8:46 PM
Whew, this is great stuff! The way you spend time and detail on describing Edward's transformation and how it affects _him_, in addition to how it affects _others_, is really fun to read. I'd definitely be down for reading about more adventures of male succubi, ha! Also I really enjoyed how you wrote the setting and gave it personality, and how all the characters feel like they inhabit a distinct place and time. That's something I always really enjoy in a story. (And I *did* guess the author, I'll admit, but mostly because I remember really liking an earlier story you'd entered into a previous contest. I recognize your style! I mean it as a compliment.)
Nutiper
2/16/23, 8:27 PM
Will there be more chapters? Will I have to wait till February 2024 to find out?? Aaah....
felix
2/16/23, 8:05 PM
I like your writing style. And I definitely like what you did with Edward 😈
Art
2/16/23, 6:37 PM
Great story from you as always! I've saved and reread all of your past stories as you are one of my go to guys! Please keep writing and adding chapters to the great ones you've already shared!
2/16/23, 5:28 PM
Well done. I like the different perspective on a hot scene from the past. I always want to see more Archie and his antics. You have a gift.
2/16/23, 5:24 PM
That was an amazing chapter. I'm glad you are back. Parts 1, 2, 3... I like where this is going. To infinity ♾ and beyond.
2/16/23, 4:09 PM
It’s pretty amazing what chatGPT ca do. I think more depth of character is needed. Not sure if chatGPT can do that. Maybe there still is a need for humans, eh?
2/16/23, 3:48 PM
Another great one!