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2/14/23, 9:41 PM
Why are comments disabled in chapter 2?

2/15/23, 8:30 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Idk probably a mistake when I posted it. It's fixed.

2/15/23, 3:34 PM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) TKU!!!
hvt
2/15/23, 2:59 PM
Incredible! It just kept getting better and better.
2/15/23, 2:56 PM
So glad you're back <3
2/15/23, 2:20 PM
Hot and ultimately romantic. Excellent!
2/15/23, 9:57 AM
Another amazing chapter! I hope his story isn't done! Thanks for sharing your time and talent!
2/14/23, 8:47 PM
I really hope there’s more planned.

Gingcub
2/15/23, 1:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) thanks! I haven’t decided whether to keep it a one off or continue. A little sadistic part of me likes the cliff hanger…

2/15/23, 2:32 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I enjoyed this one a lot, and to me it felt like a complete story cliffhanger and all. For what it's worth!

Gingcub
2/15/23, 9:44 AM
Thanks Amul! @[amul](/user/show/10003734)
2/15/23, 3:34 AM
I really loved greens transformation! The mental aspects of it, with him staying as mostly himself for most of it, was a fun angle. I also loved the ending and the reveal + the final bit with the ring also I'm picturing what is not so much a "good end" and more a "very silly end" where Corey accidentally makes Caleb too depressed to seek out another team and then he has to like.... go get him or something

2/15/23, 6:01 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Glad you liked it! I can certainly imagine an ending like that! Although, I'm picturing it would happen down the line a bit,... like 'season 7' or so, when the new 'cast' of that world are too watered down by over saturation of the trope. Think PR: Mystic Force,... there's an example of a red ranger who would just go sulk! I think at that point, Corey would just try and break into other franchises! Maybe not Magical Girls, though,...

2/15/23, 9:24 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) X-Men or Young Justice I reckon? You can play with mutant or superhuman powers.
Dylan
2/15/23, 7:12 AM
Great, short, but promising! And i bet the "accident" was just a field test for the chemical companies newest fragrant.....
Lavender Lad
2/14/23, 8:06 PM
Me wonders if Scott is perhaps the hypnotist in "Mike, the somnambulist". Also you really outdone yourself with the descriptions this time, really loved the insight into zaids thoughts while he is under control very refreshing from the other stories where the protag simply blacks out and doesn't remember the trance. The active participation from the audience in his humiliation and BSH at the end was just the cherry on top for me.

2/15/23, 6:09 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thanks so much! This chapter was really me getting the whole butt thing out of my system. There will be less butt stuff from here on, though hopefully just as much hypnotic fun! (That said, we're closing in on the end of what I have written so far. Might just be one more chapter in the near-term...)
LeftSteve
2/15/23, 5:49 AM
Great story more from you soon!