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LeftSteve
2/15/23, 5:49 AM
Great story more from you soon!
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God. I need a shower.

2/15/23, 5:41 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks, Jack! *blushing
Anonymous
2/15/23, 5:16 AM
this is surprisingly sweet! i was deeply charmed in addition to finding the story hot. would love to see more of these guys (or at least more of this premise) if that's your plan
Anonymous
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
I NEED to know what happens next!! Does Coach give in and help Luke with his problem!?
2/15/23, 3:56 AM
Hot as ever, love how mindfucked Freddy's gotten over the course of the story. Also I stan Scarlett, she's a mental health queen and a boss ass bitch. The date was a nice little interlude and a good anticipation builder, and... basically just everything related to Uri and Freddy's situation is hot as hell haha. Keep up the great work!
Anonymous
2/15/23, 2:58 AM
Love this story!1
2/13/23, 3:48 AM
Interesting turn. I wasn't expecting drones! I do like a good drone story now and again, but I'd offer you a bit of advice that I have offered to others with this type of story. Be cautious with the letter-number designations and how you use them. They can make dialogue difficult to follow and they inhibit characterization - which is kind of the point of drones, but typically the author wants the reader to follow along with and care about certain drones. I think that's why most drone stories tend to follow victims of dronification about up to the point where they are converted and then wraps the story up shortly after. It's tough to carry a story when your characters defy characterization. Will continue to follow along with this story, it has grabbed me.

2/13/23, 4:17 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Amul thank you so much for the feedback! Definitely something that I am toying around with more and maybe change the drone part around a little bit to where it is only a select few that are like totally controlled but not every person. I have already typed up the next chapter, just need to proof read it, make some changes but should be posted soon! Hopefully with the story grabbing you, you're enjoying it a lot!

2/15/23, 1:51 AM
@[MindlessJockSlave](/user/show/909009) Omg release it, this is the best story I’ve read in a while!
Anonymous
2/15/23, 1:48 AM
I f love this series please continue I love it 🫶
2/14/23, 4:22 PM
Literally everything about this was amazing, but this line in particular got a grin out of me, and I've seen you do it in several stories. > As Jesse had pulled up to the height of his stroke, Akif had suddenly rammed his dick up into him, ringing his inner bell like one of those strength contests at an old-time fair. You're a really great erotic writer, man. Comic timing, amazing sex scenes, farcical plots that _work_... And it's story after story.

2/15/23, 12:47 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Hey thanks, man! I appreciate the comments and the love for older stories. It can be easy to feel that stories all get lost in the (amazing) deluge of new stories every day. Glad to have appreciative writers like you who make the effort of building a backlog worthwhile. :)

2/15/23, 1:26 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) The site definitely makes it easy for you to click on an author and get all their stories if you really liked something more recent you saw, and the "top stories" lists are also very helpful. I'm sure there's some amazing stuff from greater than five years back that are hard to find, alas, but I'm just glad I found your body of work so easily!
2/15/23, 12:56 AM
Ahhh shit this chapter was _so hot_ but it ended too soon. My poor balls! Well, I was hard from when Theo appeared til the end. That's something. :persevere: