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2/14/23, 8:47 PM
I really hope there’s more planned.

Gingcub
2/15/23, 1:39 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) thanks! I haven’t decided whether to keep it a one off or continue. A little sadistic part of me likes the cliff hanger…

2/15/23, 2:32 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I enjoyed this one a lot, and to me it felt like a complete story cliffhanger and all. For what it's worth!

Gingcub
2/15/23, 9:44 AM
Thanks Amul! @[amul](/user/show/10003734)
2/15/23, 3:34 AM
I really loved greens transformation! The mental aspects of it, with him staying as mostly himself for most of it, was a fun angle. I also loved the ending and the reveal + the final bit with the ring also I'm picturing what is not so much a "good end" and more a "very silly end" where Corey accidentally makes Caleb too depressed to seek out another team and then he has to like.... go get him or something

2/15/23, 6:01 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Glad you liked it! I can certainly imagine an ending like that! Although, I'm picturing it would happen down the line a bit,... like 'season 7' or so, when the new 'cast' of that world are too watered down by over saturation of the trope. Think PR: Mystic Force,... there's an example of a red ranger who would just go sulk! I think at that point, Corey would just try and break into other franchises! Maybe not Magical Girls, though,...

2/15/23, 9:24 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) X-Men or Young Justice I reckon? You can play with mutant or superhuman powers.
Dylan
2/15/23, 7:12 AM
Great, short, but promising! And i bet the "accident" was just a field test for the chemical companies newest fragrant.....
Lavender Lad
2/14/23, 8:06 PM
Me wonders if Scott is perhaps the hypnotist in "Mike, the somnambulist". Also you really outdone yourself with the descriptions this time, really loved the insight into zaids thoughts while he is under control very refreshing from the other stories where the protag simply blacks out and doesn't remember the trance. The active participation from the audience in his humiliation and BSH at the end was just the cherry on top for me.

2/15/23, 6:09 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thanks so much! This chapter was really me getting the whole butt thing out of my system. There will be less butt stuff from here on, though hopefully just as much hypnotic fun! (That said, we're closing in on the end of what I have written so far. Might just be one more chapter in the near-term...)
LeftSteve
2/15/23, 5:49 AM
Great story more from you soon!
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God. I need a shower.

2/15/23, 5:41 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks, Jack! *blushing
Anonymous
2/15/23, 5:16 AM
this is surprisingly sweet! i was deeply charmed in addition to finding the story hot. would love to see more of these guys (or at least more of this premise) if that's your plan
Anonymous
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
I NEED to know what happens next!! Does Coach give in and help Luke with his problem!?
2/15/23, 3:56 AM
Hot as ever, love how mindfucked Freddy's gotten over the course of the story. Also I stan Scarlett, she's a mental health queen and a boss ass bitch. The date was a nice little interlude and a good anticipation builder, and... basically just everything related to Uri and Freddy's situation is hot as hell haha. Keep up the great work!
Anonymous
2/15/23, 2:58 AM
Love this story!1