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Dylan
2/15/23, 7:12 AM
Great, short, but promising! And i bet the "accident" was just a field test for the chemical companies newest fragrant.....
Lavender Lad
2/14/23, 8:06 PM
Me wonders if Scott is perhaps the hypnotist in "Mike, the somnambulist". Also you really outdone yourself with the descriptions this time, really loved the insight into zaids thoughts while he is under control very refreshing from the other stories where the protag simply blacks out and doesn't remember the trance. The active participation from the audience in his humiliation and BSH at the end was just the cherry on top for me.

2/15/23, 6:09 AM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Thanks so much! This chapter was really me getting the whole butt thing out of my system. There will be less butt stuff from here on, though hopefully just as much hypnotic fun! (That said, we're closing in on the end of what I have written so far. Might just be one more chapter in the near-term...)
LeftSteve
2/15/23, 5:49 AM
Great story more from you soon!
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. God. I need a shower.

2/15/23, 5:41 AM
@[Jack Parker](/user/show/10016753) Thanks, Jack! *blushing
Anonymous
2/15/23, 5:16 AM
this is surprisingly sweet! i was deeply charmed in addition to finding the story hot. would love to see more of these guys (or at least more of this premise) if that's your plan
Anonymous
2/15/23, 4:29 AM
I NEED to know what happens next!! Does Coach give in and help Luke with his problem!?
2/15/23, 3:56 AM
Hot as ever, love how mindfucked Freddy's gotten over the course of the story. Also I stan Scarlett, she's a mental health queen and a boss ass bitch. The date was a nice little interlude and a good anticipation builder, and... basically just everything related to Uri and Freddy's situation is hot as hell haha. Keep up the great work!
Anonymous
2/15/23, 2:58 AM
Love this story!1
2/13/23, 3:48 AM
Interesting turn. I wasn't expecting drones! I do like a good drone story now and again, but I'd offer you a bit of advice that I have offered to others with this type of story. Be cautious with the letter-number designations and how you use them. They can make dialogue difficult to follow and they inhibit characterization - which is kind of the point of drones, but typically the author wants the reader to follow along with and care about certain drones. I think that's why most drone stories tend to follow victims of dronification about up to the point where they are converted and then wraps the story up shortly after. It's tough to carry a story when your characters defy characterization. Will continue to follow along with this story, it has grabbed me.

2/13/23, 4:17 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Amul thank you so much for the feedback! Definitely something that I am toying around with more and maybe change the drone part around a little bit to where it is only a select few that are like totally controlled but not every person. I have already typed up the next chapter, just need to proof read it, make some changes but should be posted soon! Hopefully with the story grabbing you, you're enjoying it a lot!

2/15/23, 1:51 AM
@[MindlessJockSlave](/user/show/909009) Omg release it, this is the best story I’ve read in a while!
Anonymous
2/15/23, 1:48 AM
I f love this series please continue I love it 🫶