Recent Comments

2/13/23, 12:21 PM
Loving where the story is leading. Can't wait to see what other drone types there are, beyond D and T.
Malefiscar
12/24/22, 5:14 AM
Hey, very good chapter! reading the comments, it looks like your readers are pretty split about what they want to happen to Kyle, are you considering making two endings to satisfy both groups? I love how far Kyle has fallen, but I'm also a sucker for a happy ending, so I know I for one would love to see two alternative conclusions. In any case, can't wait for the next entry!

1/13/23, 4:16 AM
@Malefiscar Hi! thanks a lot for comment, I've been short of time and I hadn't seen your message, buddy. I was considering that idea, pal, but the more I write, the more I'm inclined for a single and definitive conclussion. I'm not fully convinced yet, so I'll keep the plan of having two endings until near the conclussion. I'm rewriting some things, but I'm doing my best to have it as soon as possible. Thanks for comment!

Zonaund
2/7/23, 5:26 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Please one ending where he's left totally destroyed and fucked up permanently. No hope for him.

2/7/23, 6:26 PM
@Zonaund Have to agree with this one

2/13/23, 2:54 AM
@Erratic101 @Zonaund Thanks a lot, I hear you clearly, dear friends! Believe me when I say that each comment is taken into account, not only for the ending, but for the upcoming chapters.

2/13/23, 8:39 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) that's awesome, hopefully, the new chapter comes out very soon. Would be nice to have a birthday read
Anonymous
2/13/23, 7:43 AM
Loved the milking! Hopefully we keep a little horror factor going on. Definitely not kosher work activity
2/13/23, 5:18 AM
Yes! I've been waiting all week for you to post another chapter of this. I love how you're giving us a balance of backstory on the gym AND scenes of naked, hard, brainwashed men. Now I just can't wait to get some scenes where David falls under the gym's influence.
2/13/23, 4:04 AM
Nice atmosphere, details, and the sensory writing at the end was excellent. A hot little scene that speaks to the desires of many young gays.
Chazf83
2/13/23, 1:12 AM
I know chury is trying to tone down Tbone's efforts to totally fuck up Rayner, but I hope T-bone succeeds, even if accidentally and against Chury's pleads, to permanently fuck up Rayner's brain. Hope he ends up in a nursing home or mental institution so fucked up he can't even take care of himself. Maybe other patients take advantage of him and use him as a sex toy. Damn I love the idea of him being left totally destroyed mentally.

2/13/23, 3:07 AM
@Chazf83 I understand, buddy, thanks for commenting! While Tyron is reckless, harebrained and clumsy, Chuy thinks things through a bit more and doesn't have his boyfriend's vindictive drive, which doesn't mean he's not enjoying with fuck up with Kyle's mind nor he's protecting him ... I don't want to spoil any surprises, but believe me when I say that there's still plenty of mindfuck on the horizon :)
Gingcub
2/13/23, 2:42 AM
I would like this world :) would love to read more about it too
2/13/23, 12:59 AM
Hot! I just wish Cliff would get transformed into a musclebound leather daddy/monster instead. Otherwise, can't wait to see the next part 😃

2/13/23, 2:31 AM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) Cheers! Part 2 should be along pretty soon. Hope you like it!
2/13/23, 1:00 AM
the first installment of this was super hot, so I'm glad to see it get a sequel! the stuff with neo saver black was especially hot and creative!

2/13/23, 2:29 AM
@[gargayle](/user/show/10018766) Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next part as well!