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2/11/23, 10:39 PM
I like the story wish for a little more push back from May only being in chastity for a very short time, 2 days. If he's able to go to sleep easily without thinking about a release then I feel he wouldn't stand for being talked in the way Oliver did in the end. He did briefly but considering he was with his mom I feel there would have been an issue. Not to mention the tie and hair. This should have been pressed a little more and then he could have played up having a rough day at work to manipulate him even more. Or leave it on a high note for Matt to have Oliver go I need to talk to Kevin for some advice. I feel at this point with how compliant Matt has been he shouldn't need advice.

2/12/23, 4:33 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) The last part already had a big argument between Matt and Oliver, so I didn't want it to feel repetitive. You should also have in mind that it's been over a month since Oliver started transforming Matt, even if he's only been in chastity for two days, so it makes sense for him to be more compliant at this point. About Oliver not needing advice from Kevin, don't worry, Matt still has a long way to get where Oliver wants him, and Kevin will help in that matter.
2/12/23, 3:43 PM
Wish I was the boy
2/12/23, 3:28 PM
This is a great series. Really well written. I love the way you describe cum and precum in your stories…and apparently alien fluids are just as good!
Drew
2/12/23, 3:05 PM
I totally missed this series when it first came out! Glad people commented on it and brought it to my attention. Eddie turning right around after getting "saved" to take advantage of Andrew (I don't know if Andrew is a sluttier name, but I'll take the author's word :wink:) really wrings an extra bit of illicit heat out of the ending. This story does some really interesting things exploring the squirmy implications of liking dumbing down stuff without getting preachy. I enjoy stories that don't try to moralize about kinks or "justify" what happens to characters because they're good or bad people. People are just people. Things happen whether deserved or not. Maybe Eddie didn't deserve to get saved, maybe Andrew didn't deserve to get dumbed down. Maybe it's a quirk as a reader, but I like stories like this and the way they make me think about kink and the world.
Feb 11, 2023
2/12/23, 2:43 PM
Very cool ideas! Sexy!!!
2/12/23, 2:30 PM
Wow, damn I shot big to this one
2/12/23, 11:21 AM
So hot, can't wait till he turns the business green haha

2/12/23, 1:57 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) This one could definitely go to some wild places with Steve lol. Fortunately I think the world is relatively safe, he is kind of a low-ambition mind controller. I like to think that's part of his charm. :satisfied:
2/12/23, 8:55 AM
The part about methane gas made my laugh. The gradual control was very well written. I thought the ending was going to be darker but it's wholesome in a perverse way, which I much prefer.

2/12/23, 1:39 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you! Your comment makes me feel like I was able to hit the notes I was going for with Steve.
1/17/23, 6:12 PM
more!

Anonymous
2/12/23, 1:31 PM
@[Kr0p](/user/show/1789958) This story looks finished, or at least the author has moved on.
2/11/23, 11:38 PM
Hard to believe this story is 20 years old. It's completely timeless. And while the silicone nipple suckers they make these days don't _quite_ measure up to the fantasy, they are pretty damn good and make it easy to pretend while reading this story.

2/12/23, 11:50 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) A couple years ago, I started a 3rd part to this series called “Bull Bag” — same premise as “Nipplesluts” and “Glans Ring” but with gonads. It’s still sitting there on my HD. Maybe some day…