Recent Comments

2/12/23, 3:23 AM
Seriously enjoyed this story. I read it as a horror story (a Lovecraftian one, obviously) with erotic themes rather than as an erotic story that descends into horror. I felt like the author let us know early on that things were going to turn out very, very badly for the villagers. It was handled well. You want to surprise your readers and build suspense, but not resort to cheap bait-and-switch tactics. Also, Solomon Gray did nothing wrong! Sucks to be the cult of gay demon worshipers who he wiped out but he clearly was right to do so. I mean, awakening Elder Gods is _baaaaad, mmmkay_?
2/12/23, 2:45 AM
Such a well thought out and well-written story but the controller character is such a capricious and relentlessly cruel (soulless, would be how I'd describe him) spoiled little trust fund snob that I do wonder how I'm supposed to jerk off to it. But still, extremely imaginative story and deserves to be read. Perhaps by readers who are more appreciative of the 'cruel idle rich controller' archetype.
2/11/23, 10:12 PM
Fan-fucking-tastic! So hot and fun story. Cant wait to read more from it. And if im not wrong, you are also the one who wrote Timestopper. I read it at Nifty. The Vano shop sounds familiar. And i fucking love that story.

Vano’s Stories
2/11/23, 11:41 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! And yep, I did write Timestopper glad you liked that too lol
Anonymous
2/11/23, 9:58 PM
Ugh, the wait for the end is killing me. It’s so hot!!!
2/11/23, 9:58 PM
Very hot and kinky 😍😍😍
2/11/23, 12:55 AM
Loved it! Hope you'll bring more chapters in the future!

2/11/23, 9:57 PM
@[Tim69](/user/show/10033241) Thanks! I do have the next bit started, but I just need to get the motivation to get back into writing again to finish it off. Stay tuned! ;)
Martin
2/11/23, 9:33 PM
It's a very nice and hot story, but I don't see any mind control aspect. Is there coming something more? If not you should probably remove the Spiral as a x-posted site.
Martin
2/11/23, 9:12 PM
This story gets it hotness from the fact that it's told from the perspective of the slave who's slowly turned into an willing and slutty whore - and we, the readers, are part of this conversion.
2/11/23, 8:51 PM
I love this story so much, hoping to learn more about Kevin
2/11/23, 7:58 PM
Well all love Archie. Anytime you want add to his saga