Recent Comments

2/8/23, 3:17 PM
This is fantastic!

2/8/23, 6:22 PM
@[Bowser](/user/show/951939) Thanks, glad you liked it. I was afraid it was too much there at the end. 🫣

Anonymous
2/8/23, 8:32 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Nah it's fantastic! If anything I'd love to see the stuff at the end expanded !
2/8/23, 6:52 PM
This is a good enticement chapter but it needs more detail and content. Well done and paced otherwise and leaves me wanting more (as if you couldn't tell).
Feb 5, 2023
2/8/23, 5:17 PM
Omg this story is everything. I’ve had a tf fantasy becoming brainwashed n transformed into a Pokémon. I 🤤🤤🤤
2/8/23, 4:25 PM
Oooooh we need more
2/8/23, 3:09 PM
Really loved this and can't wait for more. Alan modifying (maybe even taking away) Jamie's ability to speak like a normal adult and communicate clearly is immensely exiting!
Anonymous
2/8/23, 12:52 PM
Great start and buildup to a circus clown story. These clowns are something else and Max needs to find out quick.
2/8/23, 10:17 AM
WOW! Awesome. You sure know how to go! You had me with the first couple of paragraph's. Can't wait for the rest.
2/8/23, 9:36 AM
Really enjoyed this, a very powerful depiction of submission - will Max succumb like Noah?
2/8/23, 5:16 AM
Mmmmm, MMMMMM. As someone who *loves* to cuddle, this story hits every button: adorable, sweet, great “classic” hypnosis style, and perfect snuggly ending. Thank you for a great tale! :)
2/8/23, 5:05 AM
Glad you guys are enjoying! Thanks so much!