Recent Comments

1/31/23, 11:54 PM
Ahhhhhhhh, we might be getting near a reveal!!!!!! Or at least the storylines are getting tied together! Oh god, with how close Jasper and Rhys are getting, if they see "Jewel" and how much Autolius can twist people, it's going to be devastating!😱

Cuddle-switch
2/7/23, 3:23 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Time: “Aahhh! We are right there with you. There so many different threads that are finally linking up. We're just as curious about what will happen when they do. Thanks for encouraging us with your comments.” Cuddle-switch: Yeah, I love it when things tie together and intertwine like this. It's challenging, but I really hope we can pull it off!
2/6/23, 11:38 PM
Absolutely adoring every moment of this "silly story" as you are calling it. Thing is, you've created a world with infinite possibilities, with some fun, mischievous characters, and your writing is fantastic. So, kudos all around!

2/7/23, 1:27 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Oh, thanks! Wasn't expecting more comments on this one. :sweat_smile:
2/6/23, 10:10 PM
This is so good. The writing is awesome, the characters are sexy as hell. The set-up is disturbing but I can totally see this story run off in a super hot direction. I'm so glad it was recommended over in the forum as a lost/overlooked story. Apparently it's a classic though and has been around for a long time. Thanks to @Nupiter for fixing the order of the chapters and such and the author for writing it.
2/6/23, 5:13 PM
Aside from what other people had said, I find it interesting how in a tiny way this sex scene has also worked as mental manipulation. Now Colton rethinks his surgery being a punishment which changes his attitude towards the whole community.

2/6/23, 9:30 PM
@Reader Great sex definitely has a way of making you feel better about your body. :wink:
Jan 22, 2023
Marc
2/6/23, 9:28 PM
Great hot story! The mind control process is well described and gave me a strong hardon before the blow job sequence that wasn’t essential (in my opinion but other people can find it important). The idea of braces, permanently stuck inside your mouth, being a mind control device in reality is very interesting. Thank you for sharing your kink through this story 👍
2/6/23, 8:47 PM
What I enjoy about your stories is the combination of the novel premise and the strong characterisation, and this story definitely delivers on that. The central relationship ended up being pretty cute, I did enjoy how Josh comes across as the typical jockbro you see in these stories but is actually a sweet guy who's just failing at flirting with an oblivious guy. I may have said before but a great skill of yours is making characters feel real even in fantastical, unreal situations. I like the setting you've come up with, inanimate tf does tend to focus on very domineering 'you're mine now!' type relationships but I enjoy that this world has a number of roles objects can be in, even CEOs! I think that there's been a lot of thought put into the implications of the setting, as well as the characters and how they would respond to it, which sets it apart from similar stories. Also I love Rick (being a race car would be pretty cool ngl).
Iriefal
9/2/22, 11:18 AM
Yeey, thx for chapter Still loving it and can't w8 for more

Blackjinx123
9/3/22, 4:50 AM
@Iriefal, thanks so much! Glad you liked it :grinning:

2/6/23, 8:11 PM
@[Blackjinx123](/user/show/10001139) More please. Have been rereading the series. Well written and creative mind.
2/6/23, 7:51 PM
Absolutely well plotted. Loves the noir writing style and the world building. Oh, and did I mention it was FUCKING HOT. 5/5 all around.
Anonymous
2/6/23, 7:39 PM
Haven't read anything this compelling in a very long time, as expected of Dace, a truly inspired work. I particularly love the mutual innocence/ignorance of Ezra and Carter - too often these stories are told from the perspective of a sadistic or omnipotent power-fantasy, the uncertainty is both convincing and compelling. Can't wait for the next one!
Anonymous
2/6/23, 7:35 PM
Hot as always! Can't wait to see what other hypnotic tricks Rod has up his sleeve.