Recent Comments

2/6/23, 10:10 PM
This is so good. The writing is awesome, the characters are sexy as hell. The set-up is disturbing but I can totally see this story run off in a super hot direction. I'm so glad it was recommended over in the forum as a lost/overlooked story. Apparently it's a classic though and has been around for a long time. Thanks to @Nupiter for fixing the order of the chapters and such and the author for writing it.
2/6/23, 5:13 PM
Aside from what other people had said, I find it interesting how in a tiny way this sex scene has also worked as mental manipulation. Now Colton rethinks his surgery being a punishment which changes his attitude towards the whole community.

2/6/23, 9:30 PM
@Reader Great sex definitely has a way of making you feel better about your body. :wink:
Jan 22, 2023
Marc
2/6/23, 9:28 PM
Great hot story! The mind control process is well described and gave me a strong hardon before the blow job sequence that wasn’t essential (in my opinion but other people can find it important). The idea of braces, permanently stuck inside your mouth, being a mind control device in reality is very interesting. Thank you for sharing your kink through this story 👍
2/6/23, 8:47 PM
What I enjoy about your stories is the combination of the novel premise and the strong characterisation, and this story definitely delivers on that. The central relationship ended up being pretty cute, I did enjoy how Josh comes across as the typical jockbro you see in these stories but is actually a sweet guy who's just failing at flirting with an oblivious guy. I may have said before but a great skill of yours is making characters feel real even in fantastical, unreal situations. I like the setting you've come up with, inanimate tf does tend to focus on very domineering 'you're mine now!' type relationships but I enjoy that this world has a number of roles objects can be in, even CEOs! I think that there's been a lot of thought put into the implications of the setting, as well as the characters and how they would respond to it, which sets it apart from similar stories. Also I love Rick (being a race car would be pretty cool ngl).
Iriefal
9/2/22, 11:18 AM
Yeey, thx for chapter Still loving it and can't w8 for more

Blackjinx123
9/3/22, 4:50 AM
@Iriefal, thanks so much! Glad you liked it :grinning:

2/6/23, 8:11 PM
@[Blackjinx123](/user/show/10001139) More please. Have been rereading the series. Well written and creative mind.
2/6/23, 7:51 PM
Absolutely well plotted. Loves the noir writing style and the world building. Oh, and did I mention it was FUCKING HOT. 5/5 all around.
Anonymous
2/6/23, 7:39 PM
Haven't read anything this compelling in a very long time, as expected of Dace, a truly inspired work. I particularly love the mutual innocence/ignorance of Ezra and Carter - too often these stories are told from the perspective of a sadistic or omnipotent power-fantasy, the uncertainty is both convincing and compelling. Can't wait for the next one!
Anonymous
2/6/23, 7:35 PM
Hot as always! Can't wait to see what other hypnotic tricks Rod has up his sleeve.
2/6/23, 11:36 AM
I hear that you can get in a trance by looking at the white lines. but what a cliff hanger, who is at the door? maybe real father? Time he because his uncle, or is it a trucker training school come calling to turn the uni student into a fully fledged trucker himself

2/6/23, 6:15 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Oi Mal. It can be whoever you want outside the door, perhaps the lad will be kidnapped and sold into slavery. But by whom? his real father, a group of horny truckers, the police, local gangsters - I'm not going to tell you what to think. If you want another chapter give me a clue as to who is going to have the next go on the boi
2/5/23, 8:53 PM
Road hypnosis! Such a fantastic idea. This is a different spin on classic trucker stories for sure.

2/6/23, 6:06 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Hey, thanks for the kind words (as ever). I think the hypnotic effect of driving is quite well established, the poor kid just needed a little push in the right direction