Recent Comments

2/5/23, 9:32 PM
Every little twist, turn and revelation about Dave (and Brett in Dave's body) got hotter and hotter. I think Brett got the better end of the deal, but I'm happy that Dave is happy.

2/5/23, 9:54 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) It was fun to turn from RP DM to story. Your comment means a lot. Anything else you'd like to see in future stories?

2/5/23, 11:58 PM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) Well if I had to pick one single thing about your RP that I _loved_ (and that's hard to hold myself to that because you practically went through the Rolodex of things that turn me on) it was the fact that Dave (Dave's body) had a somewhat small penis and this wasn't ignored but neither was it made an object of ridicule. That was just :pinched_fingers::man_cook::kiss:
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2/5/23, 10:56 PM
This was so hot omg. I loved the resistance, the way they give in, the mind controlling cock rings. Fuck
2/5/23, 10:41 PM
Truly one of the hottest stories I've ever read - it took me 5 tries to finish it.
4/22/22, 11:55 AM
This story is just as addictive and horny to read as the drugs the characters are taking! I will say, while I understand other readers being put off by Mr. Warwick's domineering nature and how he obviously has his own interests in mind--I find that extremely attractive. The father loves the son more and has the son's best interests in mind, and they'd have a pleasant life together. The son would have his mind and personality mostly intact. With Mr. Warwick? Who knows how deep the control will go, and how erased the son's identity will become. The father and son are equals. Mr. Warwick and the son are Master and Slave, with the Master's desires and kinks being much more important than the son's own life prospects. I find the latter much more attractive in a horny story context. Sorry to the other readers! I hope that Mr. Warwick mindfucks them both, full bad end and mind erasure, and I hope it stays that way. I love that with Mr. Warwick's pharmacist background and the way he and the son are going behind the father's back, that's where this seems to be going. Dad has to learn his place under a more powerful man and hypnomaster, and the son's going to be twice as deep than that. I might be biased though, because I love the idea of training someone to be a hypnotist like yourself, only to create an unstoppable monster. The way the son describes Mr. Warwick being so dominant and even how his voice is perfect for a hypnotist, maybe even moreso than his dad... It's good. Very horny. Great story so far! Looking forwards to more!

4/23/22, 9:08 AM
@The Meaner Nook Thanks for your kind comments, loved the Grandpa's Gas series and the use of farting as the brainwashing agency. I came to reading and writing quite late in life and my earliest submission to this site (Possession with Intent series) was written while I was finishing adult literacy classes - I'm quite grateful that the comments have been removed from it because so many readers objected to the story being written in London East End vernacular. Throughout my writing there is an amibiguity around father/son relationships, probably explained by my being brought up in a fatherless household. The range has been from a father expressing his love through food (Possession with Intent), to the son wanting sex with his father, but not actually having it (Chip off the Old Block). In most of the stories the father-figure has a more dominant friend who may turn out to be a vampire (Mysterious Mr Mercer), or a hypnotist (The Making of a Stepford Lad series) but in any case gets the boy. This series is drafted to explore the father-son dynamic much more explicitly, so the next chapter will lurch off in a different direction rather than continuing a simple linear narrative. The comments indicate that this series is attracting audiences with different perspectives. Some want a gentle love story (albeit with plenty of hypno-incest) and others who are looking for something darker. At the moment both audiences are engaged enough to leave comments and going forawrd I will tread a careful path to keep them on-board.

2/5/23, 9:01 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) I never read this comment originally because I'd already finished this chapter and moved on to waiting for the next one when it was posted. Knowing this now about you makes your writing all the more impressive, _and I was already impressed._ :heart:
2/5/23, 8:07 PM
Awesome story!

2/5/23, 8:21 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thanks man. It was a hot RP
2/5/23, 8:21 PM
Any chance you’d continue this?
2/5/23, 6:28 PM
brilliantly "lovecraftian" written. Love the Yggdrisall image in the pic. Old Gods, indeed.
2/5/23, 6:22 PM
As a horror story, this was amazing, although i felt that the story stopped trying to go for arousal after the church scene and leaned more into horror. Which i felt was a shame as there were certain scenarios which i felt could have brought back the arousing mind control like when all the 28 men return to Hugo (maybe they could have had an orgy ritual under his influence) or the effects of the black rain which was hinted upon at the end. Still, either way i would say this is a really good first entry for a occult themed contest. Thank you for this good read!
2/5/23, 4:50 PM
This story contains death (not graphic), body horror, being impaled by sharp objects.
2/5/23, 11:09 AM
Omg what a cool ability to have. To be able to get pounded and orgasm without losing the need and being able to go again straight after!

2/5/23, 4:25 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) There's always a tradeoff of some kind or transformation is no fun!