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Feb 4, 2023
2/5/23, 3:22 AM
Thanks for a fun read.
2/5/23, 3:15 AM
Excellent beginning. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Feb 4, 2023
2/5/23, 2:21 AM
Hot Story!
Feb 4, 2023
Reaper's Claws
2/4/23, 11:27 PM
Great story as always! Though I would've preferred a dumbing down story but I can see that your skills have improved from the previous stories. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

2/4/23, 11:47 PM
@Reaper's Claws Thank you! Thatโ€™s kind of you to say. All of my stories tend to involve dumbing down of some kind, even if it isnโ€™t the focus.
2/4/23, 10:56 PM
I love rubber, I love rubber suits, I love rubber suits with padlocks symbol on them. This story is pushing my buttons. And it is also well written.
2/4/23, 8:31 PM
I would read an entire novel of characters you had this done to. This was exquisite.

2/4/23, 10:21 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm really glad you enjoyed it! This was an amazing series to write and I wish I had the creative juice to extend the plot further. But I'm very happy with how neatly I closed out this particular arc!
2/4/23, 8:39 PM
Waiting for the next chapter. Really hope you will continue.
2/4/23, 7:34 PM
So fucking HOT! ๐Ÿฅต
2/4/23, 7:33 PM
Great story. The implications are kind of terrifying though. If the cocking pill was in two parts so that the donor had to give consent by taking a dose as well it would be less so. As it is you've got a pill that a random top can take that's going to make him produce pheromones and influence the mind of his target and what's to stop the target from being assimilated? There was some mention that Rick could possibly back out but I don't see how that could happen when he'd already mostly folded into a giant dick. It would be interesting to either see another story in the same universe where someone is just on an unstoppable rampage until perhaps someone stops them; or a story where someone really does just give it a try and ops out from going all the way permanent. Also I think this story should have been primarily published to gay spiral stories and primarily categorized as transformation (since transformation was the main point of the story and the muscles and bears were more of the backdrop). It has really good mind control elements and I think it would be rated highly on the basis of the pheromones and conning Rick into embracing cock hood.
2/4/23, 6:30 PM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens to Jack and Dylan.