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1/28/23, 12:01 AM
This was really delightful. Poor Ethan just wants an evening to himself...what a curse popularity is. Laughed aloud a couple times, you have a Wilde-esque cadence that adds a lot of dry humor without detracting from the matter at hand.

2/4/23, 2:03 PM
@[Luca](/user/show/533555) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)
2/4/23, 12:23 PM
Any news on the next chapter?
2/3/23, 4:19 PM
Now it’s time for them to force Don into the machine, no witnesses and Phillip gets another boi 😈

Gingcub
2/3/23, 8:46 PM
Oh yes please to this! @[Readytochange](/user/show/240124)

felix
2/3/23, 9:35 PM
@[Readytochange](/user/show/240124) That could be interesting, but functionally speaking the transformative elements would pretty identical to what we saw in the previous two chapters, so I’m gonna have to sit and think on how to make it feel new/fresh

2/4/23, 11:37 AM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) It would be interesting to see it from a perspective of the guy going through it and also him trying to fight it
2/4/23, 9:44 AM
Love this, should be highly rated. Particularly enjoyed the Doctor character and how he gets off by enslaving the young men- the master of all he surveys, even if he isn't explicitly involved in the action he'll be standing there with a big old hard-on in his fine suit trousers as he watches the young men play. Long live the perverts!
Anonymous
2/4/23, 9:34 AM
Hot tale. Loved it and so horny
2/3/23, 4:02 PM
Really hot stuff! I loved how the way its written makes the reader feel like they're being manipulated too. Would love a follow up chapter.

@Whitechap_e1
2/4/23, 8:47 AM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Thanks, I have a partial second chapter but got distracted. Time to put my nose back on the grindstone. Huge fan of your work - love stories where there's something nasty in the woodshed!
2/3/23, 11:25 PM
I normally can't handle ruination stories. I felt like this one hit a bit differently for me. It still made me feel uncomfortable but it was more hot than it was uncomfortable. I think it helped that despite the cruelty with which Paulie's new family erased his life (the treatment of the photo of his mother was over the top) they did seem to love him, albeit in a twisted way. This wasn't a pump and dump ruination where the poor victim is left obese, 20+ years older, destitute, without hygiene and alone, presumably to expire from a combination of malnutrition, high blood pressure, and heart disease within a few years. I did find the revelation that Chaz and Nick were lovers to be hot and interesting. I wish it had been explored more in the story. I was pleased that Paulie wasn't left completely sexless, as I just find that rather pitiful when piled on top of everything else. I wasn't at all a fan of switching him from diapers to panty liners at the end, from the perspective of a diaper fetishist that is a bucket of cold water thrown on the story. The slow skin transformation was extremely well done, and a highlight of the story. The depilation, piercing, and tattoo scenes with the skinhead tattoo artist were another highlight. I kept trying to figure out whether the whole family was being controlled by Chaz or not. It was clear that he was the hypnotist. It was interesting that he was kept almost low-key throughout the story. It was a nice subtlety. Not that it wasn't clear he was the one doing the programming, but he never at any point stepped out with the storytelling equivalent to a boss health bar overhead. The story ended without my being able to tell who all else he was controlling, if anyone. I don't view that as detracting from the story at all. It was just an interesting feature.

2/4/23, 6:36 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'm glad you enjoyed the story, amul. After you commented on part 1, I re-read it myself last night for the first time since I wrote it and I can't disagree with any of your points. I think erotic stories are a bit like masturbation; no one handles things quite as well as one's own hand.
2/4/23, 3:17 AM
oh man, what a great cliffhanger ending! I'm so excited to see what happens next
2/4/23, 3:10 AM
I'm glad to see you're back, pal! It was interesting to read a retelling of the first chaper but from another point of view and knowing more about this mysterious guy, I'm dying to know what happens next!
2/4/23, 2:01 AM
I loved it!