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2/4/23, 3:10 AM
I'm glad to see you're back, pal! It was interesting to read a retelling of the first chaper but from another point of view and knowing more about this mysterious guy, I'm dying to know what happens next!
2/4/23, 2:01 AM
I loved it!
Jan 22, 2023
2/4/23, 1:43 AM
This is a fun story that engages with a somewhat uncommon kink. To me, the dental/orthodontia kink is so horny and you did a good job with it. The mind control sequence was interesting and fit into the story perfectly. You've obviously cleaned the text up from when you first published - I found only one small typo on casual reading: > He put on his gloves and asked Viktor to open. After checking his teeth he confirmed that they were misaligned, that affected his teeth aesthetically, but more importantly he had a bit of an overbite and that the mist convenient thing would be to get braces for his bite to work well. Viktor got nervous about the idea again. "mist" should be 'most'. Great job, story is enjoyable and hot.
2/4/23, 1:13 AM
Ooo would love to try either machine.
2/4/23, 1:05 AM
I enjoyed both versions of this story. The realistic one was a solid one-hander; short in length but long enough to offer some good details and bring everything to the point you wanted at the end. The magical re-write was also a nice horny story. I felt like the transformations were a bit too fast and easy, but they were very hot. Having read your more recent transformation story (for the Secret Satan contest) I'm comfortable saying you are improving your descriptions of transformations which is important for that kink. As far as imagination and horny transformation ideas, you're already there. Just hang onto what your brain is already telling you because it's great.
2/4/23, 12:42 AM
It's 2023 and I still come (cum) back to this story because it's so hot.
2/3/23, 11:54 PM
I am really excited about this series.
2/3/23, 2:27 PM
Hey, just found this and am loving the strangeness you conjure up. I always prefer first-person narrative as it makes the characterisation more immediate. I can see this can go in several directions but however you take it forward Sam is falling love with the master magician, just hope it gets even wilder and more perverse on the way! Looking forward to the next chapter. Billy

2/3/23, 11:29 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! What i love about magic stories is that you can really go wild with it. It's definitely gonna get more perverse XD
Gingcub
2/3/23, 11:35 AM
The wager element was a fun addition! Any chance of Rex joining Stanley in chastity?

2/3/23, 11:24 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) ;)
Anonymous
2/3/23, 4:00 PM
Like always, I’m completely amazed by how great you are at managing to craft something that is simultaneously super hot and also incredibly well fleshed out with regards to concept characters and world building. At the end of each new chapter I’m left wanting more. In these kinds of stories, I typically never find myself enjoying or rooting for the villain or asshole but there is just something about Lewis that makes him the exception. I really hope that he is able to make his dream of turning out a team full of jocks with his fat cock a reality. That being sad I’m also glad the chapter ended with him not fully being able to take advantage of Jace and his magic.

2/3/23, 10:35 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! It's a mixed blessing sometimes when I just want to bang out something quick. I like reading stories where an asshole wins, but I usually end up threading the needle between that and a happy ending. Definitely more Lewis to come in future chapters.