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2/4/23, 12:42 AM
It's 2023 and I still come (cum) back to this story because it's so hot.
2/3/23, 11:54 PM
I am really excited about this series.
2/3/23, 2:27 PM
Hey, just found this and am loving the strangeness you conjure up. I always prefer first-person narrative as it makes the characterisation more immediate. I can see this can go in several directions but however you take it forward Sam is falling love with the master magician, just hope it gets even wilder and more perverse on the way! Looking forward to the next chapter. Billy

2/3/23, 11:29 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! What i love about magic stories is that you can really go wild with it. It's definitely gonna get more perverse XD
Gingcub
2/3/23, 11:35 AM
The wager element was a fun addition! Any chance of Rex joining Stanley in chastity?

2/3/23, 11:24 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) ;)
Anonymous
2/3/23, 4:00 PM
Like always, I’m completely amazed by how great you are at managing to craft something that is simultaneously super hot and also incredibly well fleshed out with regards to concept characters and world building. At the end of each new chapter I’m left wanting more. In these kinds of stories, I typically never find myself enjoying or rooting for the villain or asshole but there is just something about Lewis that makes him the exception. I really hope that he is able to make his dream of turning out a team full of jocks with his fat cock a reality. That being sad I’m also glad the chapter ended with him not fully being able to take advantage of Jace and his magic.

2/3/23, 10:35 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! It's a mixed blessing sometimes when I just want to bang out something quick. I like reading stories where an asshole wins, but I usually end up threading the needle between that and a happy ending. Definitely more Lewis to come in future chapters.
2/2/23, 9:20 AM
Your writing skills are amazing! I admit that while the chapter started really hot, when Lewis behaved more and more like a dick it had put me off. While Franklin was the voice of reason, when he had no effect Jace was just a victim in a way. I hope that his dumbness is only temporary like in the beginning and not permanent because of what Lewis said at the end. Fucked silly can be hot, but when temporary (in my opinion). Lore wise it was a bit confusing because I don't understand why Lewis got to change things. He wasn't offered a pact and Jace didn't have a choice (also platinum blonde is way overrated, but that's my opinion on the matter. The GIF vs GIF dialogue was absolutely hilarious and made me laugh a lot! As I'm writing this it comes out more critical than appreciative, so I just want to emphasize again that dirty talk is hot and that your writing is hot. Just don't let Jace be abused or hurt. The poor guy has a heart of gold. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

2/2/23, 3:37 PM
@Reader Thanks! Technically it was a spell-pact Jace made that allowed Lewis to change him, not a bargain Lewis made. Jace was a little loopy from other effects, so he was basically tricked into making the agreement by the spirits. There will be some more details on magic in the next chapter.

2/3/23, 11:26 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ohhh, I see. It was a bit confusing because it seemed like they were waiting for Lewis to get to a mental state where they can use Lewis for their own fun (and this is why they were able to affect him directly when boosting his confidence without involving Jace in some way or another). By the way, if you think I didn't google these three to see who they are and find out that they are priapus' subordinates (as far as I understood) you're very much wrong. I love easter eggs.

2/3/23, 10:32 PM
@Reader Glad somebody appreciates my little details! :wink:
2/3/23, 10:29 AM
Love this and absolutely love your style. Big muscley himbos being topped by smaller horse hung dudes is the exact niche I REALLY get into so this is just perfect in my eyes. I also love the way your work incorporates magic/hypno kinda elements while also still having a certain amount of sweetness and good spiritedness.

2/3/23, 10:30 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thanks! I enjoy reading darker, squirmy stuff, but it's hard for me to write.
Art
1/31/23, 3:16 AM
I have so enjoyed this story! Is this the end? It has been so long since chapter 18 was posted. Thank you.

2/3/23, 9:21 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Yeah. We are many who are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
2/3/23, 6:10 PM
Hot as fuck love jock take downs
2/3/23, 4:56 PM
wow turning into a twink would be awsome and having Don become on in an accident would be too. keep up the good work on the stories 10/10