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2/2/23, 9:20 AM
Your writing skills are amazing! I admit that while the chapter started really hot, when Lewis behaved more and more like a dick it had put me off. While Franklin was the voice of reason, when he had no effect Jace was just a victim in a way. I hope that his dumbness is only temporary like in the beginning and not permanent because of what Lewis said at the end. Fucked silly can be hot, but when temporary (in my opinion). Lore wise it was a bit confusing because I don't understand why Lewis got to change things. He wasn't offered a pact and Jace didn't have a choice (also platinum blonde is way overrated, but that's my opinion on the matter. The GIF vs GIF dialogue was absolutely hilarious and made me laugh a lot! As I'm writing this it comes out more critical than appreciative, so I just want to emphasize again that dirty talk is hot and that your writing is hot. Just don't let Jace be abused or hurt. The poor guy has a heart of gold. I really can't wait for the next chapter!

2/2/23, 3:37 PM
@Reader Thanks! Technically it was a spell-pact Jace made that allowed Lewis to change him, not a bargain Lewis made. Jace was a little loopy from other effects, so he was basically tricked into making the agreement by the spirits. There will be some more details on magic in the next chapter.

2/3/23, 11:26 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ohhh, I see. It was a bit confusing because it seemed like they were waiting for Lewis to get to a mental state where they can use Lewis for their own fun (and this is why they were able to affect him directly when boosting his confidence without involving Jace in some way or another). By the way, if you think I didn't google these three to see who they are and find out that they are priapus' subordinates (as far as I understood) you're very much wrong. I love easter eggs.

2/3/23, 10:32 PM
@Reader Glad somebody appreciates my little details! :wink:
2/3/23, 10:29 AM
Love this and absolutely love your style. Big muscley himbos being topped by smaller horse hung dudes is the exact niche I REALLY get into so this is just perfect in my eyes. I also love the way your work incorporates magic/hypno kinda elements while also still having a certain amount of sweetness and good spiritedness.

2/3/23, 10:30 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) Thanks! I enjoy reading darker, squirmy stuff, but it's hard for me to write.
Art
1/31/23, 3:16 AM
I have so enjoyed this story! Is this the end? It has been so long since chapter 18 was posted. Thank you.

2/3/23, 9:21 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Yeah. We are many who are eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
2/3/23, 6:10 PM
Hot as fuck love jock take downs
2/3/23, 4:56 PM
wow turning into a twink would be awsome and having Don become on in an accident would be too. keep up the good work on the stories 10/10
2/3/23, 2:36 PM
This was terrific. So many possibilities with those rings. And going back to the last chapter - what was that about ear penetration?

2/3/23, 3:08 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! And it's quite simple actually. You just do what you normally do to an asshole, but do it in someone's ear instead. Just remember to buy cotton swabs.

2/3/23, 4:20 PM
@[CurvedCreamer](/user/show/10032455) Cotton swabs are the most insane product. We all know why we buy them, but the writing on the box says never insert them into your ears! C’mon! Unless these are from Impossiplay. I guess those instructions are the opposite. Maybe their warning would be only one ear at a time. What could go wrong …

2/3/23, 4:33 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Dang, I've never even seen that on a box of cotton swabs before. Also, I wouldn't even know what Impossiplay swabs would do lol.
2/3/23, 4:31 PM
I already want the next chapter.
2/3/23, 3:51 PM
An artful mix of the grotesque and the horny. I’m completely hooked.
2/3/23, 3:40 PM
This was hot as fuck but would love a story where a guy like Rick is actually into making holes part of his cock too 🤤
2/3/23, 3:09 PM
Still hoping for a continuation.