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2/2/23, 7:49 PM
This story is just wonderful. I felt like Tom during this chapter.
2/2/23, 6:11 PM
I hope we get to see part 4 someday
Jul 2, 2008
Xmale06
5/15/16, 9:20 AM
Oh yeah, this definitely needs another part!!!

Anonymous
2/2/23, 5:42 PM
@Xmale06 Hola
Anonymous
2/2/23, 12:24 PM
This was, as with everything you write, super hot. You write the transformation of jock to himbo slut so perfectly. I can’t wait for more!

2/2/23, 3:33 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! More to come!
2/2/23, 3:49 AM
Very nice! That is a great new chapter. I loved the magic happening to Jace. I loved how Lewis was a such a dick but that the magic beings riding Jace pushed him into it. I loved Franklin being the voice of reason calling Lewis out in his stupidity, but still wanted to dom Jace and felt bad about it. I found the Gock thing hilarious. And GIF vs GIF. Classic Blue hilarity. Most of all, I loved the flip of the obliviousness. Jace is the only one that remembers that the nerd’s dicks got bigger, but Franklin and Lewis are the only ones that know that Jace has been changing. Soooo hot. Can’t wait for more.

2/2/23, 3:25 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! It took more effort than expected, but I ultimately had fun playing with stuff in this chapter.
2/1/23, 8:31 PM
Don't get me wrong, I understand it's almost definitely the author's kink, but I'm kinda sad Jace (jason) isn't a bit more of a demanding/controlling bottom instead of a brain-dead cock-sleeve. Like sure, he can get his brain-fucked out, that's hot. But you start calling him names and shit-talking and he just gets you off *immediately* and leaves you there wondering what the fuck happened. Honestly, I'd just like Jace to get someone who wants to show him a good, long, slow fuck.

2/2/23, 3:24 PM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Thanks for reading!
2/1/23, 6:49 PM
I’m gonna have to come back later and give more thoughts, but holy shit this was HOTTTTT!!! Jace is such an adorable character. Love this story, blue!!

2/2/23, 3:22 PM
@[SwimJock](/user/show/39947) Thanks!
2/2/23, 3:10 PM
The *hoodie*. Favorite little detail in this chapter! You really stick the landing here -- not just narratively for the noir genre, but the use of lights and colors to reinforce the mood. On the subject of rational actions, I think too many years of YouTube videos picking apart "plot holes" and "errors" in media has perhaps blurred our ability to think of characters as fallible humans instead of robots. (Don't get me wrong -- robot characters are hot too). It makes perfect sense in a story, especially a story with himbo antagonists, that not every decision is a calculated move of a chess piece. All that to say, really great conclusion! Looking forward to seeing this compiled as an e-book. :wink:
Gingcub
2/2/23, 11:58 AM
I come back and jerk off to the end part of this story so often. The total control, brutality, and mercilessness make me so hard. I really love it.

2/2/23, 12:39 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) I love this comment because its the opposite reaction from @amul comment above it! You guys represent the two types of people reacting to Marcus XD
1/26/23, 2:02 PM
WHen is the next chapter! Checking everyday. I want the boys to discover coach together! or... whatever you decide!

2/2/23, 12:32 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Sorry to keep you waiting bud but don't worry it is coming. next chapter is just taking a bit longer.