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1/26/23, 2:02 PM
WHen is the next chapter! Checking everyday. I want the boys to discover coach together! or... whatever you decide!

2/2/23, 12:32 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Sorry to keep you waiting bud but don't worry it is coming. next chapter is just taking a bit longer.
Gingcub
2/2/23, 11:21 AM
This is hot! Would love to see some cbt, milking, or chastity play come next with this setup.

2/2/23, 11:41 AM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) Glad you liked it! I'm more than happy to incorporate milking cbt and chastity, they all fit the theme nicely.
2/2/23, 11:13 AM
Someone commissioned me to continue this story, and with their permission, I'm posting the continuation in parts. Much gratitude to them for getting my creative juices flowing again. I'm trying to be better with writing this year (call it a new year resolution), but if you want to help spur me along, feel free to drop me a tip at my Ko-Fi :) https://ko-fi.com/beautemps
Anonymous
2/2/23, 10:56 AM
There's something I've been thinking about that might be forcing logic where it doesn't belong, might be hot, and might be crossing the line of humiliation. Colton probably had friends before moving to the city. Now that he doesn't have any access to a phone, wouldn't they wonder what's going on with him? That begs the question, will Colton meet his friends in his new state?
2/2/23, 5:48 AM
Can't wait for more!

Elm
2/2/23, 9:45 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Second part of the first chapter is almost done! Didn't want to post the whole thing at once, since it was like 18.000+ words haha.
2/2/23, 9:34 AM
once again hot as they cum, great work!
R P
2/2/23, 8:33 AM
Thank you for writing this series, it’s such a hot and well written story and world :)
2/2/23, 2:27 AM
This episode was just so good! I loved each section and being able to "hear" their individual voices. There was even sex! The return to school is sure to put a hamper on Himbo's journey, what will he do? Seeing the return to school through B-Dawg was a great choice too! And your Spanish was perfect too! A great and fun addition to the series, so keep going!

2/2/23, 8:05 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Gracias! I think they will be at school for another few dozen chapters, maybe a hundred :grin:
2/2/23, 5:17 AM
That series be it part one or this part 2 that is beginning is simply gold. It has such an interesting vibe to it. I hope it will have more material and not be left to other ideas of stories.
2/2/23, 2:19 AM
This was an inspired story, and I never saw the twist coming. Amazing work.