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A child??
2/1/23, 8:20 AM
I liked it until he basically became a child there's nothing sexy a about a kid

screamingmoist
2/1/23, 11:57 AM
@A child?? To clarify for anyone who hasn’t read it - he became short and his voice went up a couple octaves. There’s nothing in there about him becoming younger or even acting younger. He’s still very clearly described as an adult, and described as looking like one, though to emphasize the potential humiliation of his new proportions he’s given smaller clothing and furniture. So, no, not a child.

2/1/23, 12:49 PM
@[screamingmoist](/user/show/14559) He didn't read as a child, but as a bodybuilding LP (little person). As for the helium voice, well gags exist.
Subboy-00
2/1/23, 12:32 PM
Hope you continues this storie
Mar 21, 2011
Marty
2/1/23, 12:19 PM
Love this!
2/1/23, 11:46 AM
A marvellous treat for us all with such detailed world-building and character stories..
2/1/23, 10:39 AM
That's the end of the story. Thank you to everyone who commented; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
2/1/23, 8:18 AM
Espero con ansias la actualización, me encanta (:
Anonymous
2/1/23, 7:01 AM
hot!!! love it when a hot arrogant muscle stud like Max gets taken down and turned into a slutty pussy bitch. To bad you didn't make Max wear slutty lace panties while he got fucked. it'd be hot if Max had to wear the panties to the gym and workout in them after he gets fucked and blows his load into the panties.
2/1/23, 6:33 AM
Más historias asi...
2/1/23, 6:17 AM
Such a satisfying denouement!
10/16/22, 1:30 AM
Maybe the baby is from Angel's seed and it is Kyle being reborn?

10/16/22, 1:53 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I honestly have not thought about it. If you are looking for something like that I did write something for the current Halloween challenge. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10004909

1/31/23, 2:43 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) A very awesome story too!

2/1/23, 3:49 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you! I am pondering my next story as we speak.