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1/31/23, 12:39 AM
Seriously my favorite story to read on this site. Would love to read more.
1/30/23, 5:45 PM
While this well written conclusion does fit the genre, it raises several questions regarding the previous episode. Why would the redhead secretary bind Scott and threaten him if they were in cahoots all along? And even weirder - why would Scott cooperate with Cary and give him his miniature gun back? The only explanation I've got is that the redhead secretary betrayed Scott and tried to seize full control of the operation. In this case, Scott did not sneak away to save him, but to get rid of him or run away before he blabbed to the police.

1/30/23, 6:18 PM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) He was using the redhead as his patsy or fall guy? I don't 100% have the explanation but both these would also fit the genre. But yeah, I doubt he was going back to save them. I think he expected to make a getaway. As for the gun, he knew that Cary wasn't going to kill him in cold blood. Which is also genre, as in these old films the detective main character never simply shoots his beautiful but treacherous female client.

1/30/23, 6:23 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) He knew Cary wasn't going to shoot him, but he may have saved the operation if he just hit him in the head with the gun and took out the redhead. Or, IDK, just didn't let Cary monologue and run away. It's a bit weird that he'd work with Cary at this point.

1/31/23, 12:01 AM
@[kelley79](/user/show/10022397) I think it was Scott using the red headed secretary as a fall guy while leaving Scott himself free to re-establish operations again in another manner. After all, with the villain established, it would make a blindspot for any investigations that caught wind of any restarted business, especially with Scott established as an innocent victim. And remember what happened near the end of the last chapter - Scott had a piece of wood in his hands, which Cary knew was intended as a weapon. Given that Cary had seen through things already, how hard would it have been for them to simply bonk him on the head and dose him proper (or just get rid of him)? Another thing to remember is that most of the people here are himbos. Critical thinking and forward planning are not their strong suit. The fact that Scott and the secretary got this far along is something of a miracle honestly.
Jan 30, 2023
1/30/23, 11:09 PM
Thanks for reading! This is my first story on here, and I have some other ideas for stories in the same series.

1/30/23, 11:40 PM
@[kg21](/user/show/10015478) You have a flair for writing transformation sequences. I hope you’ll introduce some sort of conflict into the story in the next chapter so that we can see Aaron struggle -whether triumphantly or in a less successful way.
Gingcub
1/30/23, 11:34 PM
Hot! Love the Sph and shrinking content here
1/29/23, 9:22 PM
Another smokin HOT chapter....totally lost it when Jason forces his cup over Supes' face....lookin forward to the next chapter.

1/29/23, 10:00 PM
@[INEEDADOMINTR](/user/show/10032686) Hey INEED!! Thank YOU 4 your positive comments!:star_struck: SO GLAD U enjoyed the athletic cup moment btwn Jason & Supes....I was pretty proud of that one!!:smiling_imp: GR8FUL that U R continuing to like where the story's going...Hope 2 keep surprising U! Have a GR8 Sunday!:sunglasses:

mbblover
1/30/23, 10:32 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I was thinking maybe lex luthor could make solid silver replicas of superman and the other's erections and balls mounted on marble dais and his office desk as symbols and proof of his capturing, conquering and converting of the superheroes.. a kinky collection if there ever was one!...I got the idea from the incredible saga "superman sucks" and one of it's many chapters...
1/30/23, 6:38 AM
That was hot! The cab driver was probably the hottest, but I really enjoyed the rest too.

1/30/23, 10:12 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks man, I really enjoyed toying with him!
1/30/23, 9:55 PM
Wow. This was really well done. I loved the slow burn over many chapters. I loved the two of them noticing things being different sometimes but not being sure. I loved the big role reversal. I loved how Tariq ended up in particular. Very very hot.
1/30/23, 9:49 PM
*Raises hand*. I thought it was hot. Pictures were a nice addition.
1/29/23, 4:57 PM
The story is great, but the fact that the main character is Arab is not used enough in my opinion. He could have been white or black, the story would have been the same currently/

1/30/23, 1:15 AM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Well, that was kind of the point. I wanted to write him just like any of my friends growing up - just a regular guy pretty much. You might like Night Five more as that references his appearance more explicitly a few times, but that's largely the extent to which I wish to make it a factor in the narrative. PS - I'm halfway through your story as well! I have to go a bit slower since French is not my native language, but it's hot reading porn in French (and I'm learning some good new terms!).

1/30/23, 9:05 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Thanks for your reply and for your work, should have said first that your story is really well written. Can't wait for Night Five then :p