Recent Comments

1/29/23, 9:22 PM
Another smokin HOT chapter....totally lost it when Jason forces his cup over Supes' face....lookin forward to the next chapter.

1/29/23, 10:00 PM
@[INEEDADOMINTR](/user/show/10032686) Hey INEED!! Thank YOU 4 your positive comments!:star_struck: SO GLAD U enjoyed the athletic cup moment btwn Jason & Supes....I was pretty proud of that one!!:smiling_imp: GR8FUL that U R continuing to like where the story's going...Hope 2 keep surprising U! Have a GR8 Sunday!:sunglasses:

mbblover
1/30/23, 10:32 PM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) I was thinking maybe lex luthor could make solid silver replicas of superman and the other's erections and balls mounted on marble dais and his office desk as symbols and proof of his capturing, conquering and converting of the superheroes.. a kinky collection if there ever was one!...I got the idea from the incredible saga "superman sucks" and one of it's many chapters...
1/30/23, 6:38 AM
That was hot! The cab driver was probably the hottest, but I really enjoyed the rest too.

1/30/23, 10:12 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks man, I really enjoyed toying with him!
1/30/23, 9:55 PM
Wow. This was really well done. I loved the slow burn over many chapters. I loved the two of them noticing things being different sometimes but not being sure. I loved the big role reversal. I loved how Tariq ended up in particular. Very very hot.
1/30/23, 9:49 PM
*Raises hand*. I thought it was hot. Pictures were a nice addition.
1/29/23, 4:57 PM
The story is great, but the fact that the main character is Arab is not used enough in my opinion. He could have been white or black, the story would have been the same currently/

1/30/23, 1:15 AM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Well, that was kind of the point. I wanted to write him just like any of my friends growing up - just a regular guy pretty much. You might like Night Five more as that references his appearance more explicitly a few times, but that's largely the extent to which I wish to make it a factor in the narrative. PS - I'm halfway through your story as well! I have to go a bit slower since French is not my native language, but it's hot reading porn in French (and I'm learning some good new terms!).

1/30/23, 9:05 PM
@[StageShowMM](/user/show/10005144) Thanks for your reply and for your work, should have said first that your story is really well written. Can't wait for Night Five then :p
1/30/23, 8:42 PM
Mmmm…can’t wait to see Theo wake up to find he’s become Brock’s roommate! I love Theo’s unknowing slide into Brock’s control as he think’s he’s brushing off his bro’s advances. I hope there’s a little more resistance, mental and physical, before the Ping, in the next chapter 😋 The leg lock would’ve worked if Theo’s arms were pinned…*wink, wink* 😏
1/30/23, 1:28 PM
Hottt

1/30/23, 6:47 PM
@Jonanator Thank you so much!
1/30/23, 11:09 AM
Nice. And leading

1/30/23, 6:47 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Thank you!
1/30/23, 4:46 AM
I loved this! Good induction scene, and I'm eager to see how Jake falls into the clutches of the gym. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

1/30/23, 6:46 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Seeing you say you loved this was HUGE to me! Gave me the fuel to really sit down and write the second chapter ASAP! Thinking at minimum a weekly cadence would be good!
1/29/23, 11:13 PM
Good start! I’m intrigued to see where it’s headed. If you need more help with the next chapter, don’t be afraid to join the discord!!

1/30/23, 6:46 PM
@[Grant Spiral](/user/show/57142) already a part of the discord and look at the activity for so long finally gave me the confidence to just sit down and write and do it and then just post it!