Recent Comments

1/30/23, 1:27 PM
Glad to see this story continue man, keep up the good work!
1/30/23, 11:08 AM
First Guide could not track any collars and tokens he made. What a lucky guy he was.

1/30/23, 1:04 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) The First Guide can track collars, if they're functioning. Anselm's isn't. Gate tokens can't be tracked because we don't want to make things too easy for him :grinning:
1/30/23, 11:10 AM
I'm starting to think we need a "ethics" rating categories for some stories (mine included). This is so hot, so exciting, but also so wrong !! :sweat_smile: I love this story, it is making me hard. (Seriously : I'm half joking half serious with this. I know this is fiction and all, but an ethic rating on stories might be a way to 1. partly describe the story 2. be used as trigger warning for people who might need it.)

1/30/23, 11:30 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Hi Nephilim! First off, I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I have a kind of blanket trigger warning in my bio since almost all of my stories are, well, problematic XD I'm writing about what turns me on personally and although i think we all know it's a fantasy, you're probably right that I should do more to warn people who find this kind of thing unethical. I'll take that onboard.

1/30/23, 12:50 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Try not to take criticisms of your character's actions onto yourself. I am one of the people who complained about Marcus, but it was about him. It's a good story. The character is well-written. But he's a well-written sociopath and that provokes a reaction. It's not a criticism of the author, or even the story itself to have a reaction to a character like that. But yeah, a character who casually betrays, effortlessly lies through his teeth, sadistically strangles someone while watching them like a kid with a magnifying glass and some ants, and ruthlessly controls his "friend" all without ever having the slightest emotion is going to provoke strong feelings in your readers. You have to expect that. If you don't want to have a certain segment of readers who have shocked or upset reactions then you probably do need to put a warning in front of your stories. Personally, I don't think a warning is necessary - but you're also gonna get some reactions.
Elm
1/30/23, 12:42 PM
This story keeps getting better and better!
1/30/23, 12:34 PM
Loving this story just caught up on the last few chapters. Great premise, an intriguing plot, all superbly executed so far. Thanks for sharing.
Mike Davis
1/30/23, 12:25 PM
Great story. It would be awesome to have Tanner's powers. I'd have a new Chad 365 times a year. :stuck_out_tongue: :kissing:
1/27/23, 12:05 PM
This is my first story in English. [Here](https://www.pixiv.net/users/3459207/novels) you can find my work in Japanese.

1/30/23, 12:17 PM
@[Youichi](/user/show/1074478) もしもし?
R P
1/30/23, 12:12 PM
Buzz settling into his new life was hot! And I’m excited to see where the First Guide’s scheming goes next :)
1/30/23, 11:43 AM
Difficult keeping up the South London accent for the duration. But you pulled it off. You have an ear for dialogue.
1/30/23, 11:36 AM
Just to be sure : That was not specifically against you. As I said, I love your story, style AND content. And others here are far less ethic.