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Lampshade15
1/29/23, 9:54 PM
The bit where Detective Garelli whispers into Wallace's ear always gets me.
1/29/23, 9:39 PM
Amazing chapter as always. I especially LOVED Mike actually getting embarrassed for once when getting changed by the Doctor! Like father like son!

1/29/23, 9:47 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! Yes, upon considering the comments from my readers I did conclude that Mike was a bit too stoic and he should show just a little bit of anxiety about his own situation. I couldn't have him go through a medical exam in front of his son without him experiencing a bit of humiliation. Hence the poopy diaper. I kind of wavered about that bit, but ultimately decided that it was Mike's turn to deal with the consequences of being diaper-dependent.
1/29/23, 9:41 PM
The beginning was just W H O L E S O M E! I don't think I would've taken Mike's intent to not potty train Colton at all as well as Colton did. In general he was one brave boy this chapter. Also, for a moment I also fell to the food processor prank, so I know first hand what look Colton had made.

1/29/23, 9:45 PM
@Reader If Mike had actually tried that, he would have had to deal with his first true temper tantrum from Colton. :rofl:
1/29/23, 9:37 PM
Love this chapter, Jack-- HOT!
1/29/23, 9:04 PM
no Inky McGrowl? no pacifier? Daddy fail! Mike earned a punishment from Daddy Roy!

1/29/23, 9:24 PM
@[d-mark](/user/show/926458) Well, you can't have a paci in while the doctor is examining you! As for forgetting to bring Inky, you can blame the author for that. I had Colton forget him precisely so that Colton could miss his presence just as he was pondering how he was going to deal with being treated like a little child all the time. :wink:
1/29/23, 8:12 PM
Excellent chapter as always. But I think Colton is much younger than 4 1/2. ;) Maybe his high chair time will bring out that inner 2 year old.

1/29/23, 8:56 PM
@[babiedboi](/user/show/191294) It's not an exact science, and we have to consider that both Mike and Colton might be holding onto a few toddler and even infantile traits for Colton simply because it brings them pleasure and deepens their bond. Thank you for reading! As much as I appreciate my entire audience, this story is meant to tick boxes for ABDLs and if you guys are happy, then the story is successful.
1/29/23, 7:21 PM
Your story gets better and better with every chapter. I'm hooked!

1/29/23, 7:31 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Hopefully poor Colton will be able to relieve his blue-balls soon. And I can quit blue-balling the audience and get onto the kinky father-son sex. :partying_face:
1/29/23, 5:55 PM
You're ny favorite writer in this site
Anonymous
1/29/23, 4:33 PM
I LOVE the hypnosis of a superhero via spiral. Very hot :)
1/29/23, 6:50 AM
This was so fucking perfect. The casual gay sex vibe antics at the frat is so HOT. I love that. Also, I freaking LOVE when the world you’re building or part of it, at least, is just very sexualized, like the lifestyle at KOK is. So, so good. Another thing that you nail is the dumb, hung jock trope (my absolutely favorite, I can get hard in seconds just thinking about it, and Achilles was *chef’s kiss*) and the erotic adventure aspect of the story, as in characters that don’t have direct sexual motivations (well, not Papi, at least) get involved in accidents or situations in which they need to fuck or get fucked to get out of. This is pinnacle gay erotica for me and you NAILED all those aspects. I only want more more and more from you. 10 across the board!

Sebastián Apollo
1/29/23, 3:39 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for the kind words and compliments. "Pinnacle gay erotica" is a high bar, so I'm honored you'd praise my work as such. Every aspect you mentioned - sexualized attitude, dumb hung jocks, fucking your way out of situations - those are all favorites of mine as well. So I'm glad you saw them reflected in this chapter. I always love to talk about what I deemed "porn logic", where it walks the line between groundedness and absurdity, and I really think this chapter in particular exemplified that. Chapter 4 is currently underway, so stay tuned!