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May 5, 2021
Dylan
1/30/23, 8:39 AM
5 of 5, but as Papa Wearbear says, i guess it needs a prequel, don't you think? Nice touch btw since your hero shares my name ;-) If your are not interested anymore, i might borrow the idea to be a feverish drug dream my own heros might live through. Dylan (boy18cute@yahoo.com)
1/30/23, 5:47 AM
Dude, this story is unreal. I can’t believe how hot and creative it is. You’re a juggernaut. And I loved how long the chapter was so we really could enjoy the buildup. I need more FAST! I hope one or more of the 7 Oportunists is a dominant bottom that’s going to manipulate and trick the hot hung jocks at the gym to fuck their faces and asses with their big cocks and making them eat out their holes!!
fry
1/30/23, 4:41 AM
Hi Brian. Is there anything we could say that would encourage you to decide to return to write more of this story? Could you let us know your thoughts?
1/30/23, 4:01 AM
Awesome story! Can’t wait to see how it progresses
1/30/23, 4:01 AM
I love this set-up. Ash is entertaining, and everyone loves himbos. You can hardly go wrong here.
1/30/23, 2:49 AM
This is so exciting! Can’t wait to see where it goes! Dumb jocks are my favorite trope ever!!!!
nycboot
1/30/23, 1:19 AM
Of course it's wonderful -and you know what I liked. But my favorite part of the story was when Colton gets nervous - and thinks he needs his pacifier and teddy bear. That shows a gut acceptance of his reality. I totally love that. Also you keep Mike as a kind of cypher. We don't know what he's thinking, only what he says and the affection he shows Colton. Perhaps when Colton really accepts the situation and learns to live and love it...then Mike will open up to him. :) As regards to your earlier comment - early this year I had a bout of incontinence, due to an operation. Catheter for 10 days. I didn't know about ABDL then and I would never consider myself the baby. But the great thing about a catheter is all you have to do is _think_ about peeing, and ....**whoosh**!....without any muscle effort...out it comes. :)

1/30/23, 1:57 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) I'm glad you were able to pick up on that. I put it all in the same paragraph for a reason; "Oh no, I'm worried that I'll never learn to accept being treated like a child, if only I had my paci or teddy to comfort me in this moment of doubt." :joy: There's a general circularity to this chapter and prior chapters that I intentionally played with and enjoyed as a writerly exercise even if it doesn't come across to the reader. Most importantly being that Colton finally left the hospital by being carried out by Mike. And here we see him need to be carried back into the hospital by Mike. The first time Colton went to the hospital he walked in under his own power but was sent there by Mike. When he was remanded to the locked ward it was Mike who brought him there. In a sense Mike (in addition to being a character in his own right) is functioning as a symbol almost as much as the hospital is. And if not a symbol, then as a kind of negotiator of the transformation, trauma, pleasure and joy that Colton experiences. If Mike comes across as a cypher, I don't think that's my intent. But while none of the characters in this story are self-inserts (for real, they are not), but if I were forced to pick which one was closest to that, Mike would certainly be closest. Much closer than Colton, for sure. But not physically - because I'm not 6'4" or a bodybuilder, or a cop, or ginger. :wink: But perhaps that accounts for Mike's mystique. I probably won't let the reader get a glimpse into Mike's head, but I promise he will open up more once Roy is put back in the mix.
1/30/23, 1:36 AM
Ooof, the tone of this was a kind of masterwork. It's incredibly dark (as befits the DIBS universe) but the just slightly over the top haughtiness of the narrator is undercut by his perversity and horniness in such a way that it makes him a palatable voice for the story. I don't think any other author has pulled this off for me. Normally my reaction to the 'ultra rich depraved slave-owner' pov is so vehement that I cannot enjoy the story, but that didn't happen here and I did find myself boning up and enjoying this dark tale of lust. It's well done and a good effort.
1/30/23, 12:28 AM
Was pleased to see a follow-up to the original. And just like that one this was short, to the point, and hot. :fire:
1/29/23, 10:26 PM
It's very cute story, My problem is I having trouble imagining them in their human forms to me they're a bunch of penises walking around., Except Michael and Vincent, and Michael's parents. Part of the fun of it I guess. I like the whole breakdown of the four corners.