Recent Comments

1/29/23, 7:21 PM
Your story gets better and better with every chapter. I'm hooked!

1/29/23, 7:31 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) Hopefully poor Colton will be able to relieve his blue-balls soon. And I can quit blue-balling the audience and get onto the kinky father-son sex. :partying_face:
1/29/23, 5:55 PM
You're ny favorite writer in this site
Anonymous
1/29/23, 4:33 PM
I LOVE the hypnosis of a superhero via spiral. Very hot :)
1/29/23, 6:50 AM
This was so fucking perfect. The casual gay sex vibe antics at the frat is so HOT. I love that. Also, I freaking LOVE when the world you’re building or part of it, at least, is just very sexualized, like the lifestyle at KOK is. So, so good. Another thing that you nail is the dumb, hung jock trope (my absolutely favorite, I can get hard in seconds just thinking about it, and Achilles was *chef’s kiss*) and the erotic adventure aspect of the story, as in characters that don’t have direct sexual motivations (well, not Papi, at least) get involved in accidents or situations in which they need to fuck or get fucked to get out of. This is pinnacle gay erotica for me and you NAILED all those aspects. I only want more more and more from you. 10 across the board!

Sebastián Apollo
1/29/23, 3:39 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you so much for the kind words and compliments. "Pinnacle gay erotica" is a high bar, so I'm honored you'd praise my work as such. Every aspect you mentioned - sexualized attitude, dumb hung jocks, fucking your way out of situations - those are all favorites of mine as well. So I'm glad you saw them reflected in this chapter. I always love to talk about what I deemed "porn logic", where it walks the line between groundedness and absurdity, and I really think this chapter in particular exemplified that. Chapter 4 is currently underway, so stay tuned!
1/29/23, 2:58 PM
Hi Jack-- Stumbled upon this riveting 2-part story yesterday/today & am hoping that you will return to (or expand) upon this Theo/Superboy dynamic!!!:smiling_imp: I have to admit there's something to the Theo character that is TRULY powerful/captivating.... especially when he methodically breaks Superboy down into a submissive bitch-- PLUS the whole humiliating collar scenario in Part 2 was absolutely BRILLIANT!!:sparkler: I know that you recently wrote about them in "Not So Super Now"....(which I RAVED about back in December!) but with your masterful writing skills, I'd agree with Essex (comment above) that you when you carefully create/craft these stories (esp. w/the particular Theo & Supes dynamic), you really leave us wanting MORE!!:supervillain: We can ONLY HOPE, right!?!? ENJOY Your Weekend & BRAVO, SIR!!:tada:
1/29/23, 1:28 PM
Not just very hot, but if this story is going where I think it's going, has the potential to be one of most powerfully erotic stories I've ever read on this site. I can't wait for the next chapter. Fingers crossed for Freddy wishing himself into two men (and us getting to follow the perspective of the submissive cock slave bottom).
Dylan
1/28/23, 10:58 AM
Great story, quick and easy bringing a dummy to good use. Looking forward to more chapters, like "Billy tries new shorts" or "Billy at the principals office" and such

1/29/23, 12:59 PM
@[Dylan](/user/show/606612) Hey thank you for the ideas, they all seem great and I'm sure I'll enjoy making the stories. I'm currently working on a new character story, I'm halfway done with it. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
rubberrobin
1/28/23, 10:26 PM
can't stop reading it hope there is more

Anonymous
1/29/23, 12:07 AM
@[rubberrobin](/user/show/241260) Hey pal, just so you know, we can see that you commented on your own post 😅 Also please, in the future, take your time when writing stories! Your old stories were very thought-out and quite well written, and this is just hasty and messy. If you need help, you can always reach out to people on the discord :)

1/29/23, 11:40 AM
@Anonymous I think this one was filled with interesting ideas, enough to make for a good 10000 word story. But when compressed into just 1000 words, this felt like more of a plot outline than a compelling story.
1/29/23, 11:05 AM
it's a good dream to be one in the story