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rubberrobin
1/28/23, 10:26 PM
can't stop reading it hope there is more

Anonymous
1/29/23, 12:07 AM
@[rubberrobin](/user/show/241260) Hey pal, just so you know, we can see that you commented on your own post 😅 Also please, in the future, take your time when writing stories! Your old stories were very thought-out and quite well written, and this is just hasty and messy. If you need help, you can always reach out to people on the discord :)

1/29/23, 11:40 AM
@Anonymous I think this one was filled with interesting ideas, enough to make for a good 10000 word story. But when compressed into just 1000 words, this felt like more of a plot outline than a compelling story.
1/29/23, 11:05 AM
it's a good dream to be one in the story
Anonymous
1/29/23, 7:46 AM
Incredible chapter, well done.
1/29/23, 7:13 AM
Hey... wait a moment... I recognise your pixiv! when are you gonna translate all your other works!!! There lots of short manga panels (like ¿ZELL? and ¿combatant baseball player?) that I think are related to your work, but I cannot read japanese!!!
Jon
1/29/23, 12:31 AM
I love all of your stories keep going, they are so good.

1/29/23, 5:46 AM
@[Jon](/user/show/434733) Thanks Jon. I'm open to ideas. What would you like to see? I also want to say, comments like this keep me writing
1/28/23, 5:34 PM
that was a good chabper, for both the uber part and the start of the mall mayhem

1/29/23, 5:45 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thanks darkblade. Anything you'd like to see soon?
1/29/23, 4:51 AM
I live to serve the Virus.
Fort Naks
1/29/23, 4:04 AM
Wow. I remember, when I was a teenager, I would always look forward to your stories. Recently, my tastes have taken me down the himbo, dumbing down, muscle growth route, and so, I would see your stories and remember good times, but hesitate to read them. WOW! I'm stupid. Why have I been skipping over your stories??!! This was AMAZING! I loved the way it was written. I love the, have a problem or hang-up, watch a video and be brainwashed. And all the sex. Edging yourself, while holding a laptop on your stomach and a mouse in the other hand, and trying not to edge before the final climax is incredibly difficult. Thank you for writing this masterful work! All hail Absman420!
1/28/23, 6:35 PM
Damn. All those new rules were hot ! Too bad we didn't get to play with them much. At this point I'm rooting for his uncle to win. Haha Definitely very interesting and unique way of making a conflict for the protagonist. I hope whatever the ending is, we still get to play with all the hunky hairy men ;) Thanks for writing ! <3

1/29/23, 3:34 AM
@[NZcontroller](/user/show/23780) I'm actually hoping that Barry wins, but in the process becomes corrupted into just as perverted as Paul. So, retaining his free will but with an imprint of Paul's desires reorienting him and changing his priorities.