Great start...

This is one hot story. I wonder if there is a sequel, where we meet the nanites creator?

Dying to find out about the third machine, and dare I ask, can they be used in combination?

This is one of my favourite stories at the moment, great premise and wonderful execution. Great work.

for some reason I have never read this before, but have to a Very good series, will have to look if there is a follow on

In case anyone is wondering and doesn’t know, here’s links to Tom of Finland images: https://www.google.com/search?client=safari&hl=en-us&q=tom+of+finland&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjMgfbC_Or8AhUgD0QIHRjHAucQ0pQJegQIDRAB&biw=390&bih=664&dpr=3 There’s an institute or foundation about his work even. His artwork, and The Hun were some of the first images like that I ever saw on the internet too long ago. Here’s some of the Hun’s stuff, on the site for the Tom of Finland org: https://www.tomoffinland.org/art-artists-online-gallery-the-hun/

This was an excellent surprise to wake up to. Two big questions: what’s up with Bryant, and what’s Uri going to use his wish for? I can see Uri wishing himself to be a dom top muscle stud like Freddy. But I can also see them agreeing to make Bryant into their dom top to take care of both of them. In that case, I’m not sure what Uri will use his wish for. I’ve loved that Bryant has been mentioned a few times and shown up, and has a thing for Uri, but hasn’t been thrown in our faces. The change up with someone else doing the deliveries today flags him as being relevant in my mind. At the very least, I was wondering if Bryant was going to show up as the expression of Uri’s wish for another bottom to please Freddy. The second delivery still had me wondering. Felt like a couple of really big things happened in this part. Which is surprising, considering it was a fairly long, extended, incredibly hot, well-written fuck fest. I read a note by the author Josh Lanyon years ago that said they try to incorporate something revealing about the characters through the sex. This part and the scenes in it definitely do that. Really big things happened! First one: Freddy seemed (to me) to acknowledge that what he’s been doing with Uri is very gay, and that he has been enjoying it and doesn’t want it to stop. Maybe I read too much into it and that’s not really what happened. It did feel to me like the first time Freddy thought that way without instantly and completely blaming it all on Uri. Second one: Freddy was much more conscious of his own thrills at the thought of being submissive. That one was a huge deal. That’s huge because it hints more at how this might end (Freddy wanting to also be able to worship a huge muscle stud and be ordered around and played with), because it’s a twist or at least realization of a different part of Freddy that’s been hinted at so far, and also… I almost don’t want to point this out because I don’t think it was what you were going for, but am not 100% sure. It almost read like there is another entity at play. Like Dom Freddy is taking over and has possibly been pulling the strings all along. Freddy reads much more plainly in this part as being two individuals, each with different desires. That’s a much more sinister take on it and again, I don’t think where you are headed so I’m going to ignore that. If that’s not it, then I am back to thinking Freddy (with Uri’s help) will figure out a way that he can be both individuals at different times, or that he can commit to one fully and someone else (Bryant? Uri?) will take on the role that he currently plays all the time. I’m extremely happy he has been playing that role, for both of their sakes (and mine). Him playing a more full dominant master this part was so hot. Him wearing the Tom of Finland outfit was a great way to go. Mentioning that gives me a super solid vision of Freddy, even down to the gigantic impossibly huge dick tight to his muscled thigh in the jeans. Such hot scenery. While on the topic of hot… you made all of that so… 11. Uri picking out the outfit for Freddy. Freddy wearing it and turning himself on so much that he wanted to wait to see the whole thing before he checked anymore of himself out. Then Uri with the mirrors! Whole house full of mirrors so that they can both watch Freddy dom out. And still, there was more hotness! Freddy figuring out that he could throw Uri immediately into subbyness was a great twist. Then oh my god, Freddy making the wishes for Uri. And not only that, but making Uri always call him sir. Fuck but that was hot. Followed up by Uri suddenly being in specific underwear and a collar. Did I read that part right and he’s in a collar now? I couldn’t quite tell for sure if that happened or Freddy just considered it. Oh, the transformations to Uri too! Shorter Uri is hot. More flexible Uri is hot. Uri with abs and a Tom of Finland bubble bot is hot. I’ll have to agree with and reiterate what SwimJock said: nothing feels forced and every detailed is thoughtfully placed. This is a masterfully done story showing how you can take a simple premise and extend it out into a hot piece of writing that includes character development and still be a lot of incredibly hot fucking. Thank you for posting yet another fantastic, hot part of this story. I am loving each and every one and will be rereading the whole thing for years.

Such a spectacular chapter! Arthur was very inspired and creative in this one. I loved every idea he had to humiliate his big manly married neighbor. Noah is my favorite target!

Great, first story can’t wait for part two

what a great surprise another hot chapter. I love the evolution of Freddie. The twist where he is using his wishes to make Uri more submissive is very hot. I love the collar and the leather kinkiness that is coming out of Freddie.