Recent Comments

1/29/23, 2:58 PM
Hi Jack-- Stumbled upon this riveting 2-part story yesterday/today & am hoping that you will return to (or expand) upon this Theo/Superboy dynamic!!!:smiling_imp: I have to admit there's something to the Theo character that is TRULY powerful/captivating.... especially when he methodically breaks Superboy down into a submissive bitch-- PLUS the whole humiliating collar scenario in Part 2 was absolutely BRILLIANT!!:sparkler: I know that you recently wrote about them in "Not So Super Now"....(which I RAVED about back in December!) but with your masterful writing skills, I'd agree with Essex (comment above) that you when you carefully create/craft these stories (esp. w/the particular Theo & Supes dynamic), you really leave us wanting MORE!!:supervillain: We can ONLY HOPE, right!?!? ENJOY Your Weekend & BRAVO, SIR!!:tada:
1/29/23, 1:28 PM
Not just very hot, but if this story is going where I think it's going, has the potential to be one of most powerfully erotic stories I've ever read on this site. I can't wait for the next chapter. Fingers crossed for Freddy wishing himself into two men (and us getting to follow the perspective of the submissive cock slave bottom).
Dylan
1/28/23, 10:58 AM
Great story, quick and easy bringing a dummy to good use. Looking forward to more chapters, like "Billy tries new shorts" or "Billy at the principals office" and such

1/29/23, 12:59 PM
@[Dylan](/user/show/606612) Hey thank you for the ideas, they all seem great and I'm sure I'll enjoy making the stories. I'm currently working on a new character story, I'm halfway done with it. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
rubberrobin
1/28/23, 10:26 PM
can't stop reading it hope there is more

Anonymous
1/29/23, 12:07 AM
@[rubberrobin](/user/show/241260) Hey pal, just so you know, we can see that you commented on your own post 😅 Also please, in the future, take your time when writing stories! Your old stories were very thought-out and quite well written, and this is just hasty and messy. If you need help, you can always reach out to people on the discord :)

1/29/23, 11:40 AM
@Anonymous I think this one was filled with interesting ideas, enough to make for a good 10000 word story. But when compressed into just 1000 words, this felt like more of a plot outline than a compelling story.
1/29/23, 11:05 AM
it's a good dream to be one in the story
Anonymous
1/29/23, 7:46 AM
Incredible chapter, well done.
1/29/23, 7:13 AM
Hey... wait a moment... I recognise your pixiv! when are you gonna translate all your other works!!! There lots of short manga panels (like ¿ZELL? and ¿combatant baseball player?) that I think are related to your work, but I cannot read japanese!!!
Jon
1/29/23, 12:31 AM
I love all of your stories keep going, they are so good.

1/29/23, 5:46 AM
@[Jon](/user/show/434733) Thanks Jon. I'm open to ideas. What would you like to see? I also want to say, comments like this keep me writing
1/28/23, 5:34 PM
that was a good chabper, for both the uber part and the start of the mall mayhem

1/29/23, 5:45 AM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thanks darkblade. Anything you'd like to see soon?