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1/28/23, 6:13 PM
Just read this hot story...THANK YOU! I wish there was another chapter in the works....!?
1/28/23, 3:18 PM
Can you send that Uber guy to pick me up? Another great episode!

1/28/23, 4:52 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I'm sure we can arrange a journey for you ;)
1/28/23, 4:14 PM
You continue to outdo yourself, Nu. Cannot get over how well written this is. Every single detail makes sense and is thoughtfully placed to serve a purpose, nothing ever feels forced. Not to mention it’s just incredibly hot. I spy a few hints of foreshadowing too, super pumped to see where you take us as this wraps up…
1/28/23, 3:49 PM
Super hot...
1/28/23, 3:48 PM
damn this was so hot love to see more from the cafi
1/28/23, 3:34 PM
The mirror interactions between Freddy and... whatever the dominant spirit in the mirror is are my favorite part of this story. I kind of agree with Freddy that Uri is an asshole lol. I'm in this to see how things shake out with Freddy. It's insanely well written and hot with great details. If I weren't trying to work on some writing today myself I would have allowed myself to cum reading this, instead I had to be frustrated. :rofl:
1/28/23, 3:04 PM
I love where the story is going. Go wild with the rule changes!
1/28/23, 3:01 PM
This chapter is so fucking hot. I didn't expect that leather stuff would be involved. I wish Freddy would be taken over by the figure in the mirror.
Dylan
1/28/23, 1:30 PM
Hey, its good you still work on it, since it is one of my all time favourite stories, beginning with the original author Philip Faras and now continued by you. I would love to contribute some ideas or even a chapter if you would like to have a partner in crime while you are too busy. If you are interested check my stuff: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/listSeries/606612 I would love to hear from you, and i'd like to know what the other readers think about me adding some ideas to your story Greets, Dylan