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1/28/23, 1:12 PM
This was another really good chapter. And I really like the implications for Freddy. Is he about to become a muscle submissive to another version of himself? Is this new dominate Freddy going to be wished into existence to take command of both of them?
nycboot
1/27/23, 1:34 AM
I love this story. But the influence of J.K. Rowling shows itself too often (for example: Translation gate = Sorting hat). In other ways it's like Grand Hotel without the melodrama. I look forward to every chapter!

1/27/23, 1:27 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There are more relevant SF precedents decades before Rowling came on the scene. Try Jack Chalker's Well World series, or some Philip Jose Farmer or ....

1/27/23, 4:07 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) It's very difficult these days to come up with anything totally 'new' in a story. I've read a lot of sci fi and fantasy in my time and concepts in this story such as the lottery, translation gates and transformation serums / bites come from many different sources, mostly unconsciously. I was not thinking of JKR's 'sorting hat' at all, but who knows what my subconscious brain was doing? I guess the important thing is whether you like what I've done with it all. :grinning:

1/28/23, 12:27 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I certainly love what you're doing. I struggle to see any Sorting Hat connection as it neither transforms nor transports. The (homo)erotic fantasies I got from such works as Chalker's enlivened my latter teens
1/28/23, 12:00 PM
Great start! Heroes and rubber are great combination. Even better if the villain wins. I'm eager to read what happens between these two.
1/28/23, 5:37 AM
Welcome! Great and hot start! I hope it don't take you too long to post part 2. Both the title and the hashtags you chose have me very interested, and I want to know what happens next!

Seducer
1/28/23, 10:12 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Ah thank you! I'm working on it now so hopefully upload it in the next few days :)
1/28/23, 9:23 AM
OK I give up. I don't get the Marmite or Cod Liver Oil reference. That is way too British insider for me. Care to explain.
Anonymous
1/28/23, 3:11 AM
Is this story forgotten?

1/28/23, 4:56 AM
@Anonymous Not forgotten! The draft for Chapter 3 is sitting unpublished at the moment, it's just missing something and I'm trying to figure out what that is haha. In the meantime, feel free to peruse my Tumblr, https://www.tumblr.com/blog/scolbert22 , where I am writing short(ish) erotic captions
AAA
1/1/23, 2:54 PM
Just a random thought, but it might be interesting to see the MC editing the records of the man who's name he changed further in an attempt to reduce the emotional impact of the name he gave him, intensifying typical masculine traits in an attempt to have made him more resilient to the bullshit he now has had faced. Of course that would mean going deeper into messing with the people he has power over - expanding the scope of what the MC changes, and the MC being changed further, in subtle ways in return. Then again, what he has done with Frank has the MC going much further past that point already, so... eh. :)

1/28/23, 4:54 AM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Thank you! I'll keep that idea in mind going forward!
1/1/23, 8:25 AM
That little moment of making Frank suck the food off his thumb was so hot, just a quiet little powerplay that Barrett gives into trying without realizing

1/28/23, 4:53 AM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) Thank you! I appreciate that :)
1/28/23, 4:09 AM
I feel like this series is going to die like the original.
Anonymous
1/28/23, 2:27 AM
I recall a science fiction movie where the "villainess" used her silver nails for hypnosis--very arousing as were the red ones here.