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1/28/23, 3:49 PM
Super hot...
1/28/23, 3:48 PM
damn this was so hot love to see more from the cafi
1/28/23, 3:34 PM
The mirror interactions between Freddy and... whatever the dominant spirit in the mirror is are my favorite part of this story. I kind of agree with Freddy that Uri is an asshole lol. I'm in this to see how things shake out with Freddy. It's insanely well written and hot with great details. If I weren't trying to work on some writing today myself I would have allowed myself to cum reading this, instead I had to be frustrated. :rofl:
1/28/23, 3:04 PM
I love where the story is going. Go wild with the rule changes!
1/28/23, 3:01 PM
This chapter is so fucking hot. I didn't expect that leather stuff would be involved. I wish Freddy would be taken over by the figure in the mirror.
Dylan
1/28/23, 1:30 PM
Hey, its good you still work on it, since it is one of my all time favourite stories, beginning with the original author Philip Faras and now continued by you. I would love to contribute some ideas or even a chapter if you would like to have a partner in crime while you are too busy. If you are interested check my stuff: https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/listSeries/606612 I would love to hear from you, and i'd like to know what the other readers think about me adding some ideas to your story Greets, Dylan
1/28/23, 1:12 PM
This was another really good chapter. And I really like the implications for Freddy. Is he about to become a muscle submissive to another version of himself? Is this new dominate Freddy going to be wished into existence to take command of both of them?
nycboot
1/27/23, 1:34 AM
I love this story. But the influence of J.K. Rowling shows itself too often (for example: Translation gate = Sorting hat). In other ways it's like Grand Hotel without the melodrama. I look forward to every chapter!

1/27/23, 1:27 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There are more relevant SF precedents decades before Rowling came on the scene. Try Jack Chalker's Well World series, or some Philip Jose Farmer or ....

1/27/23, 4:07 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) It's very difficult these days to come up with anything totally 'new' in a story. I've read a lot of sci fi and fantasy in my time and concepts in this story such as the lottery, translation gates and transformation serums / bites come from many different sources, mostly unconsciously. I was not thinking of JKR's 'sorting hat' at all, but who knows what my subconscious brain was doing? I guess the important thing is whether you like what I've done with it all. :grinning:

1/28/23, 12:27 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) I certainly love what you're doing. I struggle to see any Sorting Hat connection as it neither transforms nor transports. The (homo)erotic fantasies I got from such works as Chalker's enlivened my latter teens
1/28/23, 12:00 PM
Great start! Heroes and rubber are great combination. Even better if the villain wins. I'm eager to read what happens between these two.
1/28/23, 5:37 AM
Welcome! Great and hot start! I hope it don't take you too long to post part 2. Both the title and the hashtags you chose have me very interested, and I want to know what happens next!

Seducer
1/28/23, 10:12 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Ah thank you! I'm working on it now so hopefully upload it in the next few days :)