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1/28/23, 5:37 AM
Welcome! Great and hot start! I hope it don't take you too long to post part 2. Both the title and the hashtags you chose have me very interested, and I want to know what happens next!

Seducer
1/28/23, 10:12 AM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Ah thank you! I'm working on it now so hopefully upload it in the next few days :)
1/28/23, 9:23 AM
OK I give up. I don't get the Marmite or Cod Liver Oil reference. That is way too British insider for me. Care to explain.
Anonymous
1/28/23, 3:11 AM
Is this story forgotten?

1/28/23, 4:56 AM
@Anonymous Not forgotten! The draft for Chapter 3 is sitting unpublished at the moment, it's just missing something and I'm trying to figure out what that is haha. In the meantime, feel free to peruse my Tumblr, https://www.tumblr.com/blog/scolbert22 , where I am writing short(ish) erotic captions
AAA
1/1/23, 2:54 PM
Just a random thought, but it might be interesting to see the MC editing the records of the man who's name he changed further in an attempt to reduce the emotional impact of the name he gave him, intensifying typical masculine traits in an attempt to have made him more resilient to the bullshit he now has had faced. Of course that would mean going deeper into messing with the people he has power over - expanding the scope of what the MC changes, and the MC being changed further, in subtle ways in return. Then again, what he has done with Frank has the MC going much further past that point already, so... eh. :)

1/28/23, 4:54 AM
@[AAA](/user/show/2613724) Thank you! I'll keep that idea in mind going forward!
1/1/23, 8:25 AM
That little moment of making Frank suck the food off his thumb was so hot, just a quiet little powerplay that Barrett gives into trying without realizing

1/28/23, 4:53 AM
@[Yourmind123](/user/show/221272) Thank you! I appreciate that :)
1/28/23, 4:09 AM
I feel like this series is going to die like the original.
Anonymous
1/28/23, 2:27 AM
I recall a science fiction movie where the "villainess" used her silver nails for hypnosis--very arousing as were the red ones here.
1/28/23, 2:23 AM
Funny thing is that I myself am a middle child
Lampshade15
1/28/23, 2:04 AM
Good story, looking forward to the second part!
Fort Naks
1/28/23, 1:42 AM
Wow! I remember reading this almost decade ago on O’s old site. (Whatever happened to him?) it’s wonderful to reread it. It was tucking hot to reread it. I think I had to take many breaks for um, “relief”. You are such a talented writer. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. We’re not worthy. I also remember it in MGS. But I never really went into the comment section. I just wanted to read the stories. I was always happy to see you or callnecrazy or a few other people post. You’ve always helped to relieve “tension”.