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Apr 2, 2022
1/27/23, 7:53 PM
This was a really well written piece. The conflict is so backloaded in a really captivating way where you spend most of your time just immersed in his frustration, but there’s not really any mention of why or how until the last little section, and even then it’s delivered so subtly. A lot of authors would have focused on how John got afflicted, but you just focused in on the consequences and let that drive the narrative, just painting a very evocative picture of endless insatiable arousal. Really good.
Apr 2, 2022
1/27/23, 6:21 PM
Great story! I could definitely do with another chapter.
Lampshade15
1/27/23, 5:44 PM
This series is one of my favourites ever, I regularly come back to it.
1/27/23, 4:31 PM
Took me a lot of time to read this story through, but it was really excellent!
1/27/23, 4:25 PM
Hope more will come.
Anonymous
1/27/23, 2:55 PM
Holy shit, this was so good. One of the hottest things I've ever read in this genre. I'd love to see this become a series with more about the characters here and/or characters from other college guys. Would also love to learn more about the origins of the artifacts and more about Master Tom.
1/11/23, 1:47 AM
The worldbuilding in this story is just soooo rich! I also loved seeing the character development for Arik! Meanwhile, Talley is helpful and puckish in equal measure. What a troublemaker! Looking forward to more!

1/27/23, 2:50 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Puckish is definitely the right word for Talley! Especially considering what I have planned for him… it’s really fun to write his sexual mischief and the sheer physical power he gets to use to carry it out at times, heh. I’m also glad to have finally written some solid character development for Arik that kicks things off for him. More of that soon!
12/1/22, 4:14 PM
Excellent!

12/2/22, 3:23 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks man. Overall i'm trying to do a 10-part story. Hopefully i'll get the next chapter soon.😎

1/5/23, 3:30 PM
@[PROUDPENISADDICT](/user/show/10019999) Still hoping for another chapter.

1/27/23, 1:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) It's like halfway done. Sorry bro life and penis are making me too busy lol
1/26/23, 11:00 PM
So, I thought I'd ask my readers here. If you had a choice, would you rather see Dr. Alex again or Dr. Dale? As I was working on the latest chapter I realized I would have to send Colton back for a check-up so he could be medically cleared for both sex and working out again. Should he visit the friendly neighborhood pediatrician, or should it be the surgeon who actually worked on him? I'm agnostic to the choice, it could be either daddy as far as I am concerned. The tenor of the interaction will probably wind up being very different between the two doctors though.

1/26/23, 11:38 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Friendly neighborhood pediatrician 100%. The surgeon is too overtly sinister for this point in the story unless you want to go down a darker path.

1/27/23, 12:09 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Dr. Alex was my initial choice, but then I thought that a surgical follow-up is usually with the surgeon. It might be fun to have Dr. Alex spring a surprise check-up on Mike as soon as he's finished with Colton. After all, he is the GP for *both* of them. :relaxed:

1/27/23, 8:37 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'm pro Dr. Dale. He made a bigger impression on (for?) me, and think for Colton as well since he was there in the crucial moments of his transformation. Also, I agree that it would make much better since that the one who operated the surgery (but hey, this is a story, you don't have to stick to reality). In addition, he was the one able to calm Colton down in both times when be almost escaped. Then again, you can also save Dr. Dale for a later part if Colton would be in some sort of a mental crisis and need to be persuaded to stay, and bring Dr. Alex now since Colton is cooperative. But as I stated in the beginning, I like Dale more, so I see things in a biased way.

1/27/23, 10:46 AM
@Reader I think Dr. Dale will make a reappearance at some point regardless, but perhaps not in the hospital setting since that was a bit intense and the story is moving in a lighter direction.
nobody
1/27/23, 3:51 AM
the gayspiralstories code gives a "code not yet valid" error

Gay Harem
1/27/23, 7:34 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Guys, I just checked and it works xD **Gayspiralstories** works and it gives you ingame currency. Don't put hastag on that one. **#LunarNewYear** also works. On this one put a hastag~