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12/1/22, 4:14 PM
Excellent!

12/2/22, 3:23 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks man. Overall i'm trying to do a 10-part story. Hopefully i'll get the next chapter soon.😎

1/5/23, 3:30 PM
@[PROUDPENISADDICT](/user/show/10019999) Still hoping for another chapter.

1/27/23, 1:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) It's like halfway done. Sorry bro life and penis are making me too busy lol
1/26/23, 11:00 PM
So, I thought I'd ask my readers here. If you had a choice, would you rather see Dr. Alex again or Dr. Dale? As I was working on the latest chapter I realized I would have to send Colton back for a check-up so he could be medically cleared for both sex and working out again. Should he visit the friendly neighborhood pediatrician, or should it be the surgeon who actually worked on him? I'm agnostic to the choice, it could be either daddy as far as I am concerned. The tenor of the interaction will probably wind up being very different between the two doctors though.

1/26/23, 11:38 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Friendly neighborhood pediatrician 100%. The surgeon is too overtly sinister for this point in the story unless you want to go down a darker path.

1/27/23, 12:09 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Dr. Alex was my initial choice, but then I thought that a surgical follow-up is usually with the surgeon. It might be fun to have Dr. Alex spring a surprise check-up on Mike as soon as he's finished with Colton. After all, he is the GP for *both* of them. :relaxed:

1/27/23, 8:37 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'm pro Dr. Dale. He made a bigger impression on (for?) me, and think for Colton as well since he was there in the crucial moments of his transformation. Also, I agree that it would make much better since that the one who operated the surgery (but hey, this is a story, you don't have to stick to reality). In addition, he was the one able to calm Colton down in both times when be almost escaped. Then again, you can also save Dr. Dale for a later part if Colton would be in some sort of a mental crisis and need to be persuaded to stay, and bring Dr. Alex now since Colton is cooperative. But as I stated in the beginning, I like Dale more, so I see things in a biased way.

1/27/23, 10:46 AM
@Reader I think Dr. Dale will make a reappearance at some point regardless, but perhaps not in the hospital setting since that was a bit intense and the story is moving in a lighter direction.
nobody
1/27/23, 3:51 AM
the gayspiralstories code gives a "code not yet valid" error

Gay Harem
1/27/23, 7:34 AM
@[nobody](/user/show/930612) Guys, I just checked and it works xD **Gayspiralstories** works and it gives you ingame currency. Don't put hastag on that one. **#LunarNewYear** also works. On this one put a hastag~
Anonymous
1/27/23, 7:22 AM
totally hot
Anonymous
1/27/23, 6:46 AM
Exciting to see this story continu. So much potential and questions. You really have a knack for writing! Eager to read more
1/27/23, 5:58 AM
Amazing intro to the world and the characyers and relationships. Lookibg foreard to the next chapter; maybe learning more about the drones (or seeing them in action) :smile:
MWillis
1/27/23, 5:15 AM
This might be one of the hottest erotic series I've read. The concept, the smut, and the way you write, are all just amazingly done.
1/27/23, 4:42 AM
Can't wait for more
1/27/23, 3:23 AM
This is a great set-up!
Jun 7, 2005
1/27/23, 3:15 AM
this has so much potential if you were to flesh out the characters and the changes more.