Recent Comments

1/26/23, 5:33 AM
I enjoyed this story even though I typically am averse to the really dark stuff. I think what made this one effective was that the karma was properly distributed in the end. Bad (but hot) stuff happens but the nasty protagonist is the one who suffers the most whereas his innocent victims got off somewhat more lightly. The master is _a_ bad guy, obviously, but he was not _the_ main villain. The author was correct to not over-characterize him. If he had become the main character then the karmic ending would not have been successful.
1/25/23, 7:17 PM
I'm intrigued to see how this story develops. I can't help but wonder, what would happen if someone tried to leave? There is a sinister undercurrent, even to the more light hearted scenes. It kind of reminds me of Get Out in a way :laughing:

1/25/23, 8:48 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) You’re totally right but it would be so spoilerey I cannot say anything.

1/26/23, 2:39 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Indeed, I enjoy the sinisterness as well. All just below the surface...
1/26/23, 2:09 AM
I rated it pretty high base on the story over all was good work, but I'm still hopeful you with fix the best friend damage, a man can dream right?!
1/26/23, 2:07 AM
I wasn't happy with the way the story went. I quit reading it, but not because of the writing. Tue writing is fire, and the story well let's just say best friends hook up breaking up, bothers me. Maybe because I lived it. The JPS stuff thou a solid fantasy. Great
nycboot
1/26/23, 12:51 AM
This is exactly the kind of story I like - where we hear the inner struggle of the protagonist trying to understand his situation and afraid of not doing things right, and wonder what's going to happen. I love love love how you're gradually breaking Colton down. I guess Colton reluctantly realizes this, but Mike seems totally "been there, done that" - nothing seems to faze him. I hope at the end (or at some point) Colton breaks down and finally admits that he loves being a diaper son! Bravo for such an amazing story so far.

1/26/23, 1:34 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) I even creep myself out a little at times when I consider how much a gradual infantalization of a previously independent adult man mirrors a love-bombing style cult indoctrination. But I'd like to think that Colton will eventually be a better man for having had a second playthrough as a boy. But he has a long, long way to go if he ever wants to get out of diapers. So many adult privileges have gone *woosh* already. :wink:
1/25/23, 10:06 PM
I'm so glad to see you're back! I must say I'm very curious on how the story will unfold, now that Damien is to be put under. I really enjoyed the sock gag, one can't go wrong with stinky foot punishment, in my opinion. I just hope that Stanley and Marcus would reconcile eventually.

1/26/23, 12:15 AM
@[Jet313](/user/show/10009595) Good to be back! :) I'm glad I've caught your curiosity. It's always gratifying to know my story is compelling. Thanks for reading so far!
Anonymous
1/26/23, 12:13 AM
Please write a sequel
Anonymous
1/25/23, 11:24 PM
Resistance is fading. It will feel so good.
Anonymous
1/25/23, 10:12 PM
Can’t wait for the next part!
1/25/23, 9:42 PM
Ok, like the way this story is going.