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Apr 18, 2010
1/23/23, 2:53 PM
Too bad the negative comments. This is all fantasy, remember? Would have liked a sequel.
1/23/23, 2:12 PM
Fun start here, I particularly like the detail of the logo on the jockstraps, suggesting they're an official part of the rugby uniform in this slightly tweaked new reality. Looking forward to seeing how the rest of the team fares!
1/23/23, 2:06 PM
THis is the best chapter! I loved the recalling of the hypnosis. Your writing is just terrific and just easy to enjoy. THANK YOU and please release that next chapter soon!
1/23/23, 12:54 PM
Always enjoy the triumph of darkness, slaves to rubber always stimulate new drones. Looking forward to more.
1/23/23, 12:41 PM
Great work! Ned to be bred by this Leather God!
1/23/23, 12:38 PM
Beautiful story. And if players were more competitive, they want to be the best bitch.
Jan 14, 2023
Muscle-Flex
1/17/23, 6:39 PM
Fun premise, distinct characters, creative entrapments: the crazed elves, the reindeer man, the wooden dolls (I couldn't help but think of the Nutcracker)! Now, how does that Christmas song go, oh yes, "Squirtin' in a Winter Wonderland!" I wonder if a couple of beefy young rookie cops might decide to investigate just to prove their skills at solving crimes and taking down "bad guys"? I sure hope they don't find themselves on Santa's naughty list or they might end up forever getting their candy canes polished in the gingerbread jail.

1/23/23, 12:24 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thanks for commenting. Glad you liked it.
Jan 14, 2023
1/15/23, 9:49 PM
Growing up in rural southern Indiana in the 1970’s we had a theme park called Santa Claus Land in Santa Claus, Indiana. They later renamed it to “Holiday World” but I could totally imagine this fantasy occurring there. Well done. Would love to see more stories in this setting. Maybe another chapter where we find out more of what’s in store for this trio? Or completely new protagonists in the same setting?

1/23/23, 12:23 PM
@[BigDickednFit](/user/show/930852) Thanks, glad you liked it. There's definitely a possibility for more in this setting so I might revisit it in the future.
Jan 14, 2023
1/14/23, 12:49 PM
Definitely like what happened to Terry the most out of the three.

1/23/23, 12:21 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thanks for reading and commenting. Terry's was the only end I kind of planned in advance. As I was writing it and Terry turned out to be an asshole, mocking Mike about playing with Dollies, I knew his fate would be somewhat ironic.
1/23/23, 12:17 PM
As A gay man there is something about turning someone gay into a straight guy, i hope that will be a follow up on this story, maybe Pat and Jake team up to get laid, from reading other stories its what jocks do