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Anonymous
1/22/23, 2:55 AM
I’m a white sexy 20 year old college jock wrestler and me and my large group of fellow hot white studly jock buds are literally owned by our large group of hot sexy 20/21 year old huge Dicked black college jocks. It all started the first week of our freshman year as pure sexy innocent jock fun. We were all stripping in the boys locker room at the end of school to play some basketball when this large group of black sexy junior and senior jock boys started stripping directly across from us-literally only 3 feet from us. When they first saw us naked they looked at us saying we were Fuckin sexy looking white boys asking if we were trained while telling us not to move-and not to stare saying further they will instantly know which of us was staring because our pathetic tiny white boy dicks would grow an inch or two-as they warned us that white jocks could not help but stare at their huge cut sexy black dicks-saying further that they wouldn’t have to ask us to wrap our white jock sexy mouth lips around their massive black dicks-a white jocks obedient eye contact to fellow black jocks sexy eyes is understood by these black jocks that they need to immediately start getting hot head from these white jocks at their first time meeting-in this case right there in the locker room!
Bruce
1/22/23, 2:31 AM
Your a great writer I am looking forward to chapter 12
1/20/23, 12:01 AM
Still periodically working on stuff but we’ve both been focusing on our own things lately. We still chat regularly! I just shared some great hypno porn vids with him to help us both stay in the mood 😜

Anonymous
1/20/23, 12:29 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) !!! Joey?

1/20/23, 2:18 AM
@Anonymous 🤷🏻‍♂️🤫😋

Anonymous
1/22/23, 1:18 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) PLSSSSSSSSSS
1/22/23, 1:16 AM
I hope there’s a part 2.
1/21/23, 5:25 PM
I genuinely love your style of storytelling. It feels like you work very hard to plot out complex concepts and the conclusions feel both _of_ the story, and surprising nevertheless. Also, Mason and Conner will probably be super happy as filthy puppy and his equally filthy owner / slave, respectively.

1/22/23, 12:10 AM
@[Some Guy](/user/show/10017465) Thank you very much! I really appreciate your kind words! And, yes, I'm sure the two of them will be very happy. Their new lives may be nothing like what they had wanted for themselves, but now it's all they've come to realize they need. At least, with a little help,...
Anonymous
12/21/19, 3:37 PM
Still frustrated by this series because the three added words rarely alter the initial wish in any material way, unlike the clever twists Derek put on the wishes in his [original story](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/3499).

1/21/23, 10:34 PM
@Anonymous This will unlikely reach you but returning to this comment I want to thank you as this was one of the most helpful comments I received to improve the series. I hope you've found more twists in my later work
12/8/19, 12:32 AM
Really liking this storyline. Maybe have a sideline story following Nathan as he realises he can change other guys. As for Genie, how about he attends some college sports events. Wrestling, swimming, etc. Perhaps the star wrrestler wants more size and becomes sumo instead. Just keep at it, because its a great story line and premise. Thanks for your hard work

1/21/23, 10:19 PM
@[BulkBrit](/user/show/699778) Re-reading old messages for inspiration and encouragement. I hope you enjoyed the sequal with the college sport award ceremony
1/21/23, 10:11 PM
Your descriptions are so vivid I feel like I’m there viewing it. Makes waiting for the next chapter so difficult.
Connor
1/21/23, 2:47 PM
well, that helped me out with my morning wood! great story -hot & sexy - passionate & intense

1/21/23, 10:04 PM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) I'm glad it was both a great story and a great jerk-off session! Josh and I had a lot of fun fleshing out the relationship and therefore the passion. I always think that in order to have a really hot sex scene you need build-up that demonstrates the relationship and the sexual tension between the characters. Then you feel their need and desire with them. Hope you find more stories like this to do it for you!
1/21/23, 8:54 PM
The action swept me in to the sort completely. Such incredible things happening. I look forward to learning what caused Tucker to end up so short changed. I thought it was very exciting and frightening when the guys on the team were being in danger of not getting their manhoods returned. Thank You for the great moments You create. I really love my time in them.