Recent Comments

SuperHero_Guy
1/22/23, 1:05 PM
You certainly must breed me I'm ready for you to lead me deeply into Temptation, no turning back to my old life. Go deep, go often, BREED ME ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Martin
1/22/23, 1:05 PM
This is a very hot story! I look forward to read more of it. I think it's more a Collar than a Spiral story, though.
Jan 22, 2023
1/22/23, 12:20 PM
separating by paragraphs would be fine, it is illegible

1/22/23, 12:28 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Sorry, it's my first story here and thought pressing enter would add a line break. Now I've edited it to have the proper paragraph separations, but it's still being reviewed :)
1/22/23, 12:13 PM
This ticks all my boxes with latex, drones and a superhero turning bad -hope we read more soon
1/22/23, 10:35 AM
As a kid who grew up in the country and know the friends out of convenience country kids make, we would disagree with your use of street for a country _road_ But otherwise I'm loving this story.
1/21/23, 5:31 PM
This was great! Iโ€™d love more about these characters!!

1/22/23, 6:20 AM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thank you, there will be more stories with Adam and Ed, and some other characters too!
Connor
1/21/23, 4:02 PM
thanks for painting such a hot picture. very sexy - nice writing...!

1/22/23, 6:19 AM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) Thanks!
1/21/23, 10:49 AM
Great story. I hope thereโ€™s a 2nd part with Adam and Ed or maybe the gardener to punish him for spying.

1/22/23, 6:19 AM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) There might be, but I should clarify that this series is going to be a gay erotic anthology with some multi-part stories, so this one might get a second part.
1/21/23, 7:21 AM
I gotta ask, where is that picture from?

1/22/23, 6:18 AM
@[Mordred](/user/show/913855) Unsure, got it from a random Tumblr post, but if you find the model let me know!
JeruuSalem
1/22/23, 4:32 AM
Part 2 please ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ‘‰๐Ÿ‘ˆ