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1/21/23, 3:19 AM
Is it me, or is Mike driving a lot of the ship too? It feels almost like there's a push-pull influence that Mike has on Joey, rather than one-sided Joey to Mike. Maybe I'm reading too much into things. Still, you're doing a great job and it's amazingly fun to read
1/21/23, 2:43 AM
super excited about this story and where it's going! the dynamic between dusk and James was real fun
1/21/23, 1:34 AM
can't wait to see the drones in more closeup detail too
1/20/23, 11:29 PM
So hot
1/20/23, 11:26 AM
thank you for posting the and welcome back

1/20/23, 11:20 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Thanks man. Ive realised this stories a bit vanilla and ive nearly reworked the ending, so check back sunday eve and the rework should be done. I submitted it the same day I wrote it, which i dont normally do for thus reason
1/20/23, 10:53 PM
I'm getting reeeeaaally excited to see how Kid rocket is going to be corrupted, especially how the influence of Dusk might linger and slowly slowly lead him down the darker path! Anxiously waiting for the upcoming chapters, so great job!!!!
1/20/23, 10:27 PM
Can't wait to see what happens next! Pumped to see what fun stories Zaid will tell!
1/20/23, 9:49 PM
This is great! Like the previous commenters, I'm hoping it's going to be an on-going sequence similar to your "Doc" stories. More adventures with "Master Tom" ... or maybe there's more than one "Master" with Artifacts? Either way, it would be hot to read about the takedown of other athletic teams and fraternities with the same amount of detail this swim team got. Love to see cameos of some of these characters again helping to bring down other college-boys!
1/20/23, 8:57 PM
Fucking hot. It would be nice if Joe now also muscles up and becomes a permanent addition to the Resort.
Connor
1/15/23, 6:05 PM
I've never read mind control erotica before. Very hot story. Thx for sharing. . . !

1/20/23, 8:35 PM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) Thanks for reading!