Recent Comments

Alex
1/19/23, 7:50 PM
This was incredibly hot and pushed all my kink buttons. Wish I could find me a magic cock! I’d love to read about how the new tiny cock impacted your life. 🥵
1/19/23, 7:04 PM
Keep it coming, my friend
Jan 16, 2023
1/19/23, 7:03 PM
You never miss. So hot!!!
Jan 16, 2023
1/19/23, 6:30 PM
Oh wow, very hot and sexy. What a fun story. The characters were great. I also like how positive the frat guys were. I also really like the dazzle mask idea. Great story!
Tyrol
1/19/23, 6:08 PM
Very much enjoying this story. Even though it's light on the sexy bits, it's still engaging for what it is. Impressive since I'm hungry for more of the slaves getting fucked.
1/19/23, 5:36 PM
This story is the only reason I’ve stayed locked all week. You got me so wildly horny…
1/19/23, 2:40 PM
So dramatic and sweet! There are traces of present Norismo here and there and it sounds very much like a YA story I wish I had read as a gayling. Can't wait for the next part!

1/19/23, 5:01 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Like all YA fiction it gets weirdly dark and violent :laughing:
1/19/23, 4:18 PM
I really liked the line about how guys get hard at wrestling practice "more than you'd think". That is very very true with powerlifters. When we train guys are always getting hard. Some guys just act like it's not happening. Other guys purposely point out what a raging boner they've got in their shorts. Between the adrenaline of big lifts, muscle growth, touching and being touched when we spot each other, smelling each other's sweat, high stimulant preworkouts, huffing ammonia, etc... to say nothing of us all being on Juice... men are bound to harden up. We don't train in singlets often but in the weeks before a competition we do. Both at training and at competitions, you'll often see guys with big hard dripping cocks in their singlets.
1/19/23, 4:00 PM
Seriously hope you eventually come back to this. Such promise.
8/8/22, 12:36 PM
It's interesting to see the contrast between Zane and Aiden: Zane is drunk with power and even when he considers doing something for his brothers'(?) benefit he is quickly distracted by lust, while Aiden is altered to yearn for Zane's cock yet when he finally has the chance to get it he firstly takes care of his younger brother(?), moves on to his chores and only then he allows himself to go wild.

8/9/22, 11:12 AM
@Reader so I'm the one who was writing for Aiden and Bruce, and my thought process was that Aiden was so eager for his brother's cock that he did not want there to even be a chance of being interrupted. i could have probably stressed that more, but there was distraction. Also, Zane made him the good, responsible middle brother, and I was playing to the role.

PromethiumJPM
1/19/23, 5:36 AM
@Reader Discipline rules Zane’s life and now His Home, and His Charges! While Zane is still exploring the ring, he IS exerting HIS Will via the ring, and while we still do not understand the Rings’ full level of control, as readers, we have a “leg up on Zane”. But we still don’t know where this adventure will end!? If ever it does…

PromethiumJPM
1/19/23, 5:39 AM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Brother, I like the explanation and yet as I’m still just reading this through, and not getting to tied up in the comments, I hear you, and the Aiden and Bruce story can be a wild ride!

1/19/23, 3:57 PM
@[PromethiumJPM](/user/show/10022007) Thank you for your comment! I loved doing this story with @Mind Labyrinth. It did eventually end.