Recent Comments

8/8/22, 12:36 PM
It's interesting to see the contrast between Zane and Aiden: Zane is drunk with power and even when he considers doing something for his brothers'(?) benefit he is quickly distracted by lust, while Aiden is altered to yearn for Zane's cock yet when he finally has the chance to get it he firstly takes care of his younger brother(?), moves on to his chores and only then he allows himself to go wild.

8/9/22, 11:12 AM
@Reader so I'm the one who was writing for Aiden and Bruce, and my thought process was that Aiden was so eager for his brother's cock that he did not want there to even be a chance of being interrupted. i could have probably stressed that more, but there was distraction. Also, Zane made him the good, responsible middle brother, and I was playing to the role.

PromethiumJPM
1/19/23, 5:36 AM
@Reader Discipline rules Zane’s life and now His Home, and His Charges! While Zane is still exploring the ring, he IS exerting HIS Will via the ring, and while we still do not understand the Rings’ full level of control, as readers, we have a “leg up on Zane”. But we still don’t know where this adventure will end!? If ever it does…

PromethiumJPM
1/19/23, 5:39 AM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) Brother, I like the explanation and yet as I’m still just reading this through, and not getting to tied up in the comments, I hear you, and the Aiden and Bruce story can be a wild ride!

1/19/23, 3:57 PM
@[PromethiumJPM](/user/show/10022007) Thank you for your comment! I loved doing this story with @Mind Labyrinth. It did eventually end.
1/19/23, 3:44 PM
I love how each chapter reveals a little more about this world and it’s origin. As more questions get answered more are created. Curious as to why individuals are selected to be reborn here. What is the criteria? They all seem different in their original lives. And of course, who is the first guide and does he ‘report’ to someone higher?
Connor
1/19/23, 2:14 PM
Thanks, Jonanator - I hope I was able to help you dump a nice load :kissing_heart: :laughing:
sean
1/19/23, 1:52 PM
I live to seeve virus
1/19/23, 1:23 PM
Adore seeing Sanjay in his new life with the Djinn. Can't wait for more it's amazing work <3
1/19/23, 12:47 PM
Any continuation? This is an insanely hot start...

1/19/23, 12:59 PM
@[jackeddaniels](/user/show/1333513) I definitely might continue this! I got caught up with life events so plans for this kinda fell to the wayside. If you have any ideas for what chapter two might entail I'll be happy to hear them :)
1/19/23, 2:19 AM
Another great chapter. And i agree with other commenters. I love that he is not ruining someone's lives even though he is becoming more master. And oh boy, Scott is slowly joining his playthings.

1/19/23, 12:51 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Yeah, he is learning more about himself and enjoying the power but he isn’t an asshole. I’m glad you’re enjoying it and thanks for the comment, it’s appreciated.
Smolpp
1/19/23, 1:27 AM
I love the slow, yet impactful take of this story! Your writing is fantastic as always!

1/19/23, 12:51 PM
@Smolpp Thanks, I’m glad you’re enjoying it.
1/18/23, 11:37 PM
Ooh this was fun. I very much enjoyed it. Sooo can I say I hope Scott becomes his too. Hehe But yeah fun stuff! I'm really happy he's not ruining lives. Side idea. He can drug the dudes that work for Mani. Make them his. Lots of fun to be had there.

1/19/23, 12:50 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Yeah, Brian is enjoying the power, but he isn’t evil. Thanks for the comment.