Recent Comments

1/17/23, 7:48 AM
I love the cock magick! My favorite parts of this wonderful adventure are not knowing what’s going to happen to our hero & the guys around him next and when the story has a guy loose inches, especially in a balance exchange with someone else.
1/17/23, 7:47 AM
Very hot. Looking forward to reading the other parts that are posted.
8/3/22, 1:09 PM
Will it be continued? I was stonehard throughout the story!

1/17/23, 6:02 AM
@[xboi](/user/show/10027140) That's the plan.
Martin
1/11/23, 9:32 PM
This series is actually really hot. Why has it gotten so little attention I wonder?!

1/17/23, 6:00 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) My guess is that there's no part 5 yet. :wink:
Martin
1/11/23, 9:40 PM
Why did you never continue this? It's an AMAZING story...

1/17/23, 5:59 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Honestly, I kind of fell out of the mood because of some life stuff. I started a sequel, but hit a dead end. But seeing as how people seem to enjoy it, and how I want to write again, maybe I'll start continuing it.
1/17/23, 5:03 AM
I have been meaning to comment on this story for awhile. I really enjoy the transformation of Chad throughout and how well paced that was for the story. I didn't expect the twist at the end which was also an awesome twist. I do wish that you would have taken some time to change Dan in a similar way, however I get this was likely intended to be a short story. I hope you do more like this.
Feb 7, 2021
1/17/23, 4:46 AM
Thought it was fantastic. :)
Jan 16, 2023
1/16/23, 9:22 PM
Always great buddy!

1/17/23, 4:43 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you, glad you liked it!
1/17/23, 4:30 AM
Hot :)
1/17/23, 3:33 AM
Wow! Never in my wildest dreams could I have conceived of even the possibility of turning/perverting the storyline of Stephen Vincent Benet's "By The Waters of Babylon" into a gay mind control story. You even pull off a pitch-perfect pastiche of the style. A tour de force! Very impressive. I'm wondering what other totally non-MC classic stories could be transformed into Spiral stories by someone with sufficient imagination and skill ...