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1/16/23, 11:46 PM
Wow! I read this whole story sequence in one go, and it's incredible, up there with your all-time best material. You do a great job of showing the gradual mental changes that the artifacts bring, with plenty of hot details (like the "team underwear"). I'd actually love to see you continue this, because I feel like there are a lot of avenues this could go. For instance, how in control of the artifacts is "Master Tom" really? Maybe they're corrupting him, or using him to reproduce themselves. I can imagine a scenario where it starts out with just 4 artifacts, but now there are magically more as Tom has brought more men under their thrall, harnessing their sexual energy. Could we maybe see a future chapter where, falling deeper under the influence of the artifacts, Tom gradually gets the compulsion to build his "team" even larger and recruit more men?
1/16/23, 2:21 PM
While I'm a huge fan of stage hypnosis stories, these last couple where you've taken a different tack have been really imaginative and very enjoyable too. Top stuff!

1/16/23, 11:15 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Don't worry, there's plenty of stage scenes to come as well! I tried to mix it up some in this one (though I can't stray too far from my roots!).
1/16/23, 11:14 PM
very good indeed
1/16/23, 11:08 PM
Very nice indeed… hopefully a part 2…
1/16/23, 9:13 PM
Phewf
1/16/23, 5:20 PM
This was a fascinating story! I loved how you built it up, and you did very well with the POV. The tragedy of it is very fundamentally human, at least once the POV returns to the People of the Plains. Glad to have read this.
1/16/23, 2:51 PM
Loved this. Hope we get to see another item from the depository

1/16/23, 5:18 PM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) I think you will eventually see others. I’ll have to do some more development.
1/16/23, 1:53 PM
That was a fun ride, you deserve a rest after all this work

1/16/23, 5:17 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) And rest I shall!
1/16/23, 8:56 AM
Thanks man. A lot of work and a lot of fun. So many hot transformations and a great ride. Maybe we'll see other items from the depository of debauchery.

1/16/23, 5:17 PM
@[Lusty Stallion](/user/show/10012213) Maybe you will.
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1/16/23, 5:08 PM
Every new chapter reminds me why this is hands-down my favorite story on the site lol. It's so damn fun to *read.* That sex-tango interrogation scene across the crowded ballroom floor... Then Evan spilling his secrets as he earnestly jacks of Carrington and ends up fucked by him as Carrington succumbs to the sex-pheromone gas... Dashiell Hammett, eat your heart out! All eyes on Murkwater, I guess, since one of his goons gets Carrington at the cliffhanger — but then I have to wonder, maybe that goon has more than one boss? Whether Murkwater is a red herring or not, I feel we might Learn All in the next chapter. It can't come soon enough.