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1/17/23, 12:21 AM
Great world-building, giving us just enough to understand what's happened to humanity, without big info-dumps getting in the way of the story. I also love the subtle ways the narrator corrupts his father and brothers at the end.
Mic
1/17/23, 12:19 AM
I love it, it’s heavy but a hot dark Fantasie , love the bank account stealing, sex change, dumbing down , can he add 3+3? Make him even dumber into a statue which looks hot , breaths and gets fucked and let him then cum often , please write more such hotfantasie story’s , trick more arrogant guys and cashrape them and make more guys dumper , love it , when you write such a story again I will buy and pay you 20 bucks
1/16/23, 11:48 PM
Short but very effective!
1/16/23, 11:46 PM
Wow! I read this whole story sequence in one go, and it's incredible, up there with your all-time best material. You do a great job of showing the gradual mental changes that the artifacts bring, with plenty of hot details (like the "team underwear"). I'd actually love to see you continue this, because I feel like there are a lot of avenues this could go. For instance, how in control of the artifacts is "Master Tom" really? Maybe they're corrupting him, or using him to reproduce themselves. I can imagine a scenario where it starts out with just 4 artifacts, but now there are magically more as Tom has brought more men under their thrall, harnessing their sexual energy. Could we maybe see a future chapter where, falling deeper under the influence of the artifacts, Tom gradually gets the compulsion to build his "team" even larger and recruit more men?
1/16/23, 2:21 PM
While I'm a huge fan of stage hypnosis stories, these last couple where you've taken a different tack have been really imaginative and very enjoyable too. Top stuff!

1/16/23, 11:15 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Don't worry, there's plenty of stage scenes to come as well! I tried to mix it up some in this one (though I can't stray too far from my roots!).
1/16/23, 11:14 PM
very good indeed
1/16/23, 11:08 PM
Very nice indeed… hopefully a part 2…
1/16/23, 9:13 PM
Phewf
1/16/23, 5:20 PM
This was a fascinating story! I loved how you built it up, and you did very well with the POV. The tragedy of it is very fundamentally human, at least once the POV returns to the People of the Plains. Glad to have read this.
1/16/23, 2:51 PM
Loved this. Hope we get to see another item from the depository

1/16/23, 5:18 PM
@[texas95](/user/show/10020267) I think you will eventually see others. I’ll have to do some more development.