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1/15/23, 8:05 PM
So hot that Nate’s fathers are to become drones like James’s fathers. Does James even remember what happened to his fathers and his brother? Can’t wait for act 3.
Sebastián Apollo
1/10/23, 3:43 AM
Lucky Beck! Lucky Talley! Lucky Arik! _Lucky readers too..._ I think a lot of your worldbuilding has really shone through in this particular chapter - the overwhelming power of a Firecracker's Rut, a Siren's linking, naiads, and kinky sexual risks. I can only imagine what you've cooked up for the boys on the rooftop of the lounge and on Nate's lower back... Looking forward to more sex, fun, and frat shenanigans, which I know you'll deliver in spades! 😉

1/15/23, 8:04 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) This chapter has been one of my favourites to write just for all the worldbuilding I got to do! I felt like Arik's character shone through more, too, and I got to write Talley as that mischievous, borderline-demonic little fucker he is for the first time in a while. Looking forward to getting out more!
1/15/23, 7:42 PM
Will thos one be finished someday?
Anonymous
1/15/23, 6:51 PM
love it!
Dylan
1/15/23, 5:40 PM
And now a cool cliffhanger again… 😎👍
1/15/23, 5:20 PM
Well I can't wait to read the next chapter! Hope you can post the next one up soon.
Ben
1/15/23, 5:18 PM
Fuck this was 🔥 loved it!!
Connor
1/15/23, 5:14 PM
Great story idea! 2 arch enemies fucking is very hot. Awesome story...
Dylan
1/15/23, 5:08 PM
Hot 2. part!
1/15/23, 4:54 PM
"I turned so I could kiss him, and the said" *he* said., and just underneath, you've wrote "most" instead of "must. :sweat_smile: Really cool series, probably could be cross-posted on gay cupid. Tho, I must say the definition Brian gave of "consent" a few chapters ago is sketchy. :satisfied: