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Jan 14, 2023
1/15/23, 3:28 AM
Part 2 please would love more of this journey for Luke!
1/12/23, 10:41 PM
Absolutely amazing story. Loved every chapter! Your writing is incredible and I found myself looking every couple of days for when the next chapter would be posted. Thanks for the hot read and can’t wait to see what’s next!

1/15/23, 12:11 AM
@[MuskMan96](/user/show/2108550) Thank you! I know this chapter took ages to come out but I had to seriously brainstorm how I wanted it to end and rewrote it several times.
Frory
1/13/23, 1:45 PM
Ah, I wonder if they will appear in your next great story.

1/15/23, 12:09 AM
@[Frory](/user/show/10023524) You know I love my expanded universe. Maybe we'll see them again.
1/13/23, 6:43 PM
Bravo! What an excellent ending! Wonder where Kamay and Entowa will end up though, little sad to see them have to leave the jungle

1/15/23, 12:08 AM
@[Stormbound](/user/show/312438) it's a little bitter sweet, but I couldn't see the tribe changing their ways (nor would I want to!) nor Kamay staying to rule as Chief of the tribe who enslaved him. Entowa and he will surely have a wonderful life together outside the jungle.
1/14/23, 7:18 AM
I haven't been able to comment on previous chapters due to my being confused about wanting to experience the ecstasy of the Asnu Sisi nectar and being annoyed over Kamay's being outmaneuvered time and time again. (These days this just reminds me too much of real life in this country, and the growing attraction of using mind-bending erotic drugs and gooning myself to sleep every night!) I was beginning to feel i would have to plant a few Asnu Sisi plants in the author's bed in order to help him see reason. (Nothing personal, GoonNoob!) Given that things are looking up a little for justice at the end of this chapter, i will hold off with my Asnu Sisi plot. Meanwhile i have to admit that i have found the delightful plight of the Qayllar quite arousing. Actually i am quite proud that i kept my wits about me and read fast enough that i managed not to cum at all this chapter (though the thought of being caged and drinking piss did slow me down for a minute or two). In spite of all the angst GoonNoob has caused us all with this story, i for one want to thank him for sharing his incredible imagination, his writing skills, and his sick sick mind. (Enough sweetness! I'm off to read the next chapter.)

1/15/23, 12:07 AM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I won't lie there is a little sadistic joy I take with these long stories where the hero is put through sexual heaven and hell (who can tell which is which half the time) and readers often don't know if I'm going to give them a happy ending or condemn them to their fate. Next and final chapter is (FINALLY) out so you can see what fate I've chosen for Kamay. (also, bold of you to assume I don't sleep with Asnu Sisi in my bed ;) )
fry
1/14/23, 11:46 PM
Very interesting concept for a story. The characters are interesting and growing in complexity with lots of potential for sexy adventures. I look forward to reading more! Please continue!
Oct 2, 2018
1/14/23, 11:28 PM
Definitively could do another story about Eric. Interesting that Matt was already gay.
fry
1/14/23, 10:51 PM
I see it's 2 years later, but no part 3 yet? Suggestion: there should be at least 1 more chapter about him learning the ropes, and increasing the bond between Jason and Chris, experiencing their emotional bond as well as physical attraction for one another.
1/14/23, 9:44 PM
Thanks for that story. I find Red Skull a very good figure for transforming Captain in something... horny. And of course I like cigar smoke as a tool, as I use that, too in my stories. Please let us know how it continues!
1/14/23, 8:29 PM
Someone please continue this story!! One of my favorites of all time!