Recent Comments

1/13/23, 8:35 PM
Very hot transformation love the attention to formal wear. Still would like to see more of Leo's internal dialog. You had it in the last chastity but not this one. Like what's Leo thinking of this entity going this to his friend or what's he think of his new style as he's helplessly taken over.

1/13/23, 11:54 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Merci, j'écris sur ce qui me plaît. C'est intéressant ce que tu as remarqué, j'y reviendrais dans certaines parties pour la suite, je me suis concentré sur la rencontre entre les deux personnages.
Anonymous
1/13/23, 3:06 PM
Great story! Can't wait for the rest!

1/13/23, 11:48 PM
@Anonymous Merci, je garde la cadence selon mon temps libre.
1/13/23, 11:27 PM
Très bonne histoire, je suis moi même fétichiste des costumes, cravates et aussi noeuds papillons!!

1/13/23, 11:46 PM
@[Fredexor](/user/show/1754025) Merci, il semble que nous partageons des goûts commun.
1/13/23, 7:09 PM
C'est sympa d'avoir du texte en français de temps en temps. Surtout avec une histoire comme ça. Merci.

1/13/23, 11:44 PM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Merci.
1/13/23, 2:15 PM
Géniale comme histoire!!!!

1/13/23, 11:43 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Merci pour les encouragements, je continue.
1/13/23, 10:44 PM
As always, this is a very nice and interesting story. I hope to read more as soon as possible. And if it were to be published as physical book, I would buy it immediately.
Dec 3, 2022
dmc
1/13/23, 10:22 PM
Great story, i hope you continue it. Maybe trap other heros...
nycboot
1/13/23, 1:04 AM
I'm so happy that Mike took Colton home. But I'm wondering: I think you said that there's no regression in this story. But the way Mike is treating Colton, I would think Colton would catch on that he's kind of an "adult baby." Is he going to suck his some or get into the swing of things? Thanks so much for continuing!!

1/13/23, 1:27 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) There will be no mental regression. I'm sorry if I gave a misleading answer earlier. Colton will retain his mind, faculties, and agency. However he and Mike are going to experiment with various kinds of roleplay and power exchange within an ABDL context. That's the next story arc pretty much in its entirety, just missing all the fun details. And Colton isn't a dummy, he understands that Mike is treating him as though he's younger than he actually is. He might be surprised by how much he likes some of it.

1/13/23, 9:45 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I actually like this kind of dynamic! It will be really interesting to see how it develops
6/3/20, 5:33 AM
Ngl, this really leaves me in a battle within myself on whether or not the zombies win or not... currently leaning on against lol but

1/13/23, 9:33 PM
@[LuvMehSomeDaddies](/user/show/546423) The way this is so me as I write I genuinely don’t know who will win. The story is alive and only it can know how it wants to end.
Martin
1/12/23, 9:27 PM
You know, what you're creating here is worth being called a novel. You cannot read this as a simple sex story, it's way more, an amazingly well-told tale of power and mystery. I wonder if you're going to unravel the mysteries or if you're going to keep it in shrouds. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to see where this is heading. And you should x-post to Cupid, so I can add a "romance" (heart) rating, too!

1/13/23, 6:25 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you, Martin; you're very kind. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I guess it is quite romantic. How do I 'x-post' it to Cupid?

Martin
1/13/23, 7:03 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) If you edit or add one chapter and x-posted it to Cupid (on the story submission page, on the very top, where you can select the primary and secondary sites, just add "Cupid" as a secondary site), the whole series will be x-posted once that chapter is published and approved. Or I can do it for you...

1/13/23, 7:41 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks, Martin. I'll try to do it when I submit the next chapter.